Title: Good, but could be better
Reviewed By: Kivalle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. Well, you have good grammar, and I'm guessing that the non-anime is Code Lyoko, seeing as how one of the girls' name is Yumi. I liked it mostly, but I think it was missing some depth. Try to make chapters longer, please. Aside from its length, it's pretty good.
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