| "The Unexpected" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ChibiShinobi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason I became a member of MM was so I could review this story, so that should indicate how much I enjoy it! Please continue writing!
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Reviewed By: Otoko no Ten Ken On: August 22, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to say that I love this fan fiction. Misao's abusive relationship with Enishi shows how one cannot always understand the difeerence between love and comfortablity in one's life. I am deeply looking forward tot he next chapters. Thank you.
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Title: Waaii!!
Reviewed By: Midnightdream51 On: April 12, 2005 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, well MM was being a bitch and deleted my previous review, so i'm resubmitting. I *love* this fic. I like how you fit all the RK characters into this AU universe (Kaoru and Aoshi?! where's Kenshin?????). At first i didn't realize that "Megumi" WAS Megumi (I'm a little dense) but I'm all cleared up now. Who's Yahiko supposed to be? A waiter? Love how the Oniwabanshuu are the bouncers ^^. And Aoshi is sooo hot. Love how Kamatari 'molested' him (and how that sickened Aoshi so much...*sniggers*). And just what *is* up with how he "deals with stressful situations"?! Kaoru can't have appreciated that...though Misao and Kamatari certainly did. It was hilarious when he left Misao AND Kamatari wanting for more-the voyeur! But Aoshi is sooo hot-fitting that the name of the club fits his eye description *melts*. Love the plot, the alternate universe, the characters (except Enishi-baaad enishi) and I CAN'T F***ING WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE!!! There are only so many times one can reread a fic. Ths is undoubtedly one of the best RK fics I've read. You *have* to continue. I don't care if you only have one review-the rest of the ppl out there suck andd don't know what they're missing.So please update!!!You haven't just left Misao and Kamatari drooling-I'm salivating for more too.Write! Write! Your beloved fan awaits you. ^_
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Reviewed By: emkhaein [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh. Aoshi's got an interesting strategy for dealing with awkward/stressful situations... XD
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