| "Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. That is the best Hika/Aki I've read yet. I was a bit thrown off by the use of the word "cock" as it didn't seem to fit, but the story was involving and detailed, and it's very hard to find good yaoi. I applaude you, from one yaoi writer to another. =)
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Reviewed By: Ibara-hime On: January 24, 2005 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now I finally found you! Some times ago I accidentally stumbled over your site and read this story. I so looooooved it! It´s great and the atmosphere simply amazing. And I´d love a sequel, so pleeeeease? (I don´t mind being stabbed with a lollipop if I really get a sequel) Actually I loved it so much that I´m working on a translation. Would you mind me posting it on a German site? Please tell me lean_on_sky@hotmail.com bye Oh, I loved your other stories as well. But WITHOUT YOU is definetely the best.
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Reviewed By: Vanice On: January 23, 2005 03:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh Sequel please? I would love to read about what happens when Akira returns from China.... or perhaps Hikaru can make a trip over to China? *puppy dog eyes*
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Title: but lollypops are non violent weaspons
Reviewed By: therhoda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this view of a relation ship that isn't easy or well thought out. Akira is a stick in the mud and we all know it. But You showed what were to happen if he cared and was forced to choose. He of course chooses to go but he dosn't leave with out a sound either. I loved the ice cream trying to picture Akira throwing ice cream is rather fun. Now for my death by Lollypop, I would like to see what happens at the air port in a year and does even Akira have the will to stay gone for the whole year. Also does Hikaru have the nerve to after a year to think about what happened show up to get him? There you can kill me now and I would prefer a cherry instrument of death. :)
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