| "Long Cool Woman" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 19:02 CDT
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You have a great deal of style and artfully walk the line between dark and... obscene isn't the right word, but nothing else is coming to me at the moment, apologies. I was browsing through your lighter pieces as well and throughly enjoy your wry sense of humor and quick wit. As your other comments mention, you left a great path open for a unique longer AU piece; but this stands beautifully on it's own and has a wonderful, dramatic build, colorful characterization, and definite sense of completion at the end. It was a pleasure to read, thank you.
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 01:44 CST
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Wow... just... wow. The originality of this fic--of all of your fics--blows my mind. ~_~ Your writing style is very clean and precise, and you don't shy away from the dark stuff when the fic calls for it. I guess you probably aren't gonna continue this story at all, but you've built up such an interesting AU that I would love to see another installment. Many kudos.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I'm just in love...I can't express how much I love your writting style. I really think your muse deserves a big warm chocolate chip cookie. Cause I've never been disipointed when I sit down to read something from you. This one I think has could be more then a one shot, and defenetly could stand on its own without being a song fic. Unusual choice of song by the way...don't see many song fic with a clasic rock theme...I even listened to the song while I was reading it ;)
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: March 12, 2005 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Absolutely amazing! I was so caught up in that one, you made it such a real situation, such a real story in so few pages! You did such an excellent job! Very bright ideas about that shikon drug addict, and you aren't too far from the original truth about the shikon either, if not dead on! Excellent approval for an excellent writer. Great job!! Everytime I read a work of yours, I am unfailingly, delightedly, and refreshingly surprised.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: March 01, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far, one of the best fics i have ever read. i hope that you continue it or something! its sooo goood!!
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Title: Long Cool Woman
Reviewed By: Assassin_Chiq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I've read so far... and I've got to have read over a thousand by now... (i have no life *blushes*)... I really enjoyed it and I hope you write another chapter, or a sequel, whatever works best! Keep up the great work... ps. loved the song!
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: January 26, 2005 20:57 CST
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i was listening to the radio earlier...and i just ahd a great thought...id do it myself but i really suck at writing...but what if you did another songfic with crossfate's "so cold" between kagome and inuyasha and a nice little make up at the end? just a thought...^_^
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: January 21, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!!! WOW!!!! ME LUVS IT!!! I have never seen anything liek this before!!! YOU ROCK!!!! THis is freakin awesome!!!!! Naroku as a drug dealer....PRICELESS!!!! AWESOMENESSS!!!! FRIGIN AWESOME!!!! I WOULD GIVE THIS 1 MILLION PLUS, RATING IF I COULD!!! but they dont let me!!! argg!!!!! awesomeness!!! by the way, im reading all your fics, so eventually you can say that you've had a reviewer do that!!! ^_^ thanks for the brilliance!!! AWESOME!!!! FREAKING AWESOME!!!
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Reviewed By: kisses of velvet On: January 21, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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whoah...that was awesome. and i agree with snowecat29, it's very interesting and i'd like to see another chapter of this beautiful au.
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Reviewed By: snowecat29 On: January 21, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really different, is it just going to be a one-shot? It's such a unique AU, I don't think I've seen one like this. I'd love to see what happens with Kagome's recovery if you choose to continue this.
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