| "Unspoken Fantasies" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh come ON its been over 2 friggin years! You write really good stories and you need to update!!
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg u have to update soon. the story is so amazing...did InuYasha understand what Kagome meant when she said "Da"? I mean, da could be short for -dad or -daddy or hell, i call my mom ma, so da? Right?
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:08 CST
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Can you please update!!Say it with me, UPDATE!! Any way great story!!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated you must put on another chapter soon. Update as soon as you can I love this story and can't wait to find out what happens. Please update.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 18:21 CST
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UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! 'insert pic of someone waving arms around franticly and yell' Hehe....he...hehe...ha..............ha UPDATE!.......please? are you? there? 'starts wailing and crying' oops 'snaps back into emotionless self' mhmm 'clears throat and straightens kimono' sorry that won't happen again. UPDATE! well yup update A.T.T.I.C also........ I love your stories. 'stares at screen' are you listening? probably not yup well please update ignore non gratful people who won't review just write for that sake of the people who do read and review, for their sanity 'laughs maniccally' if they have any left.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: ToDifferentToBeReal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love this story. I can't wait for the next chap I love your style of writing and I love alot of your stories I've read quite a few of them so update as soon as it is convinent to you. ;D ----- ToDifferentToBeReal
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Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 12:54 CDT
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Lol. I like the way you've made Rin, she's so crazy wierd yet herself at the sametime...in an interesting way. And the answering machines of the men were hilarous too. The relationships are good and I like that we get to see them while they were already formed instead of at the beginning like mos stories...I'm very curious to see what happens! But--if you don't mind me asking--do you think you can space the story more...all the words together makes it rather hard to read...Thanks for sharing your story! Much love! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hanyou_swimmer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story. when i first read the summary i thought it was going to be a little cliche, i mean i've read a million stories where kagomes dad hits her and inuyasha saves her, but there is a very thin line that you can walk to keep it from being like so any other stories, and you are still walking that line (it's supposed to be a really good compliment, does it make any sense?) i especailly like the reason that inuyasha can't have ramen for a month! when i read it i laughed so hard i cried! i do have a couple of questions- are inuyasha and kagome together? is she his mate? are they demons? and lastly does anyone who about the abuse? oh well, i can't wait until your next update!! ~*~Hanyou_swimmer
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Reviewed By: Marissa On: August 22, 2005 00:26 CDT
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Oh, this is good, I like it very much. please update soon!!!!!!!!! Great story, I love reading it. ~Nina
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Reviewed By: Morbid Angel On: August 06, 2005 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no, rin may be screwed, but when she tells seshomaru then daddy screwed.:D this gonna get good.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dis is really kewl; hope you update!
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