Reviewed By: Ayame K. On: January 24, 2005 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic use to be on FF.net, right? I went to re-read it the other day and it was gone! But then I saw the message on your FF.net profile and I see what happened. The first six chapters were kind of hard to understand because there was too much sillyness going on. But after that, I started to understand everything even more. Your writing style changed for the better and you started doing a lot of character developement for your self insertion characters Bud and Montel. I would have to say that the best part, so far, in this story is when your fused five different Gundam series together into the Gundam Wing universe so that it actually would make sense. When several changes occurred, like the United States actually fending off the OZ Coup de'tat and declaring war against them, that simply opened up the storyline to allow the Gundam 0079 and 8th MS Team series to be added in, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Now I have read up to the last chapter and I can't wait for you to update. I recommend this story to folks all the time.
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