| "The Forgotten Past" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI) On: April 02, 2005 02:26 CST
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Awesome! I love when kaoru has secret pasts. this is quite abit different then the norm. but still good. ka-san is scary. Poor kenshin, kaoru wont talk to him even though he is in a similar boat with his split personality with the battousai. I think it's wonderful that you tried tom lighten the mood with Kenshin and SAno hugging but it kinda made them seem to stick too far out and be soo different then everyone else. If i didn't know any better it would seem like him and kaoru weren't ment to be, but that's crazy, he just seems too passice about this. He should be really snappy and on the last straw right now. Just a thought! Love your story~!
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Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I didn't really understand what is going on and i don't like Kaoru as a murderer.Nope..that i do not like.
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Reviewed By: Yukiyo On: December 26, 2003 03:13 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i wanted to know how many chapters there is its 14 but how can i read on y to the 6 chapter.
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Reviewed By: bearjamas On: August 22, 2003 14:21 CDT
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i have to agree with the previous reviewer. this story rocks! but it lacks an ending. |
Reviewed By: marissa On: August 22, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I don't want to sound rude or unapppreciative, because this is an awesome story, but did you have to end it? It was just getting sooooo good!!! Are you at least thinking sequel or something? oh please say I read it wrong and it's not over!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: December 26, 2002 06:14 CST
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This story is pretty kick-ass. Are you planning on updating sometime soon? |
Reviewed By: Yvonne On: December 09, 2001 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fiction. Not only did it make Kaoru look...evil and well Ninja, it was very very well written. I hope you hurry up though! You MUST finish this 'epic' before I die... |
Reviewed By: Michiru On: November 04, 2001 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRR!
Finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: meseta On: November 07, 2001 23:36 CST
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This is great..I've often imagined what it would be like if Kaoru was an evil villianess, just couldn't write it down into a definite story. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter too. |
Reviewed By: Scichan Hirameki On: November 19, 2001 03:59 CST
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I have way too much imagination for my own good. Your descriptions were so good, i could see it in front of my eyes. Are? Where's the rest? Finish pls! |
