| "Saiyan Games" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work. I really enjoyed your characterization of Vegeta, and how you explained the circumstances of him wanting to be with Bulma as mates. The Saiyan culture and inclusion of Vegeta's father in this tale was excellent.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story, you did well with the characters, and did not rush which was nice
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Title: Re: Saiyan Games: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Troy Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I've left a long review in the Pic-A-Fic thread in the Fanfiction Forum. If you're interested, check it out. http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&goto=449527&rid=11#msg_ 449527 If you'd like to respond to my review, please email me at troythomas1@yahoo.ca
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Reviewed By: kyra-chan On: July 23, 2003 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! absolutely wonderful! that was sooo cute i loved it, and as u can tell by the rating i gave it that it was absolutely flawless i thought it was very sweet and yet a perfect idea of how the characters should be portrayed and the idea of the game was excellent ^_^ very original i hope all of your stories are this good i might juts have to read all of them and tell some of my fic writing friends to check them out as well im new to this site and already i find a good piece of work worth the time it took to read! great job!i just hope whatever work i post here can compare i write a lot but not as talented as this |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 11:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good. I would have liked to see it go further but if there's a sequel then it's fine. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Natz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O mi Gosh. This was so good. It was an original idea and thought provoking. The car race was so detailed. Do you have experience with them? And the way you portrayed the characters was so realistic. It was an undeniably sweet feeling watching Bulma beat Vegeta in the Link. She has proven herself. And Vegeta .. whoa. It was so great reading a chara of Vegeta that was not overy sadistic or sappy. You got the right balance. |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I loved it! I thought I had read all of the good V/B fics out there among the billions that are, but I have sadly missed this one until now! It was beautiful! So well done! BRAVO!
BTW: Where are all of your f*cking reviews?!?! This just goes to show you that Media Miner and their readers have NO clue of what is good or not! I've read SOOOOO many fics on this site that are *supposedly* popular, but they all suck ass! This one, on the other hand, is amazing and only 8 people have read it?!? Please do not take this as an insult to your writing! You are amazing and I and going DIRECTLY to your follow up fic, not stopping to pass go or collect $200!
Please write more! Do you just write Vegeta/Bulma fic or do you have others on different DBZ characters? |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooohhh, hehehe! I like! I like very much! |
Reviewed By: Rissa of the Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GOTTA WRITE A SEQUEL!!! *chants* Se-QUEL! Se-QUEL! Se-QUEL!!! |
Reviewed By: MidnightDemon1 On: July 06, 2002 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked the fic but how in the world did Bulma beat Vegeta in the game her first try?!!!!? Overall I liked it and I'm sure I;'m one of many that want a sequel! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: July 03, 2002 10:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!
I canīt wait to read the sequel. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. I just love it, so much. Another beatiful Bulma/Vegeta get together. You can never have to many. Keep up the good work! |
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