| "My Dark Red Eyed Mystery" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: redrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 14:30 CDT
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OH PLZ HURRY UP I just can't wait to see what happens next so continue on whit this great fic.
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Reviewed By: master-inu23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 14:55 CDT
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this story is GREAT. PLZ continue.
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Title: Awesomely kawii!
Reviewed By: Urufu On: September 04, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best ROD fanfic I have ever read, the only reason I really watched the show was to see how the relationship between Anita and Junior would advance. I definatly look forward to more of your work.^^
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: Anita_king On: August 27, 2005 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!!!!!! PLZ write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: always [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 01:58 CDT
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It was ... wow! It was the first fanfic for ROD that I have read and now I think that you spoiled the rest for me. The writing style was good, I don't think there were many misspellings, but there were a lot of grammatical errors. It was still easy to read though, good job!
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Reviewed By: Dangeresque123 On: April 24, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
They said Junior was actually 6 years old, but they sped up his aging process. Anyways, this was an awesome story. I never thought about them as a couple later in life. Honestly, I thought Junior might be gay...(LOL)
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Reviewed By: Anita&Jr On: April 21, 2005 23:18 CDT
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I loved it please post a new chapter ! ! !
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Title: my dark eyed mystery
Reviewed By: midget101 On: April 21, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. the only fics i found on anita and juinor were horrible. yours shows me that there are still people who can write good fics without having any crappy plots.i would like it if you wrote some more to this chapter. email me at suicune1@myway.com
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Reviewed By: Yo-e On: April 20, 2005 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVED it. The only R.O.D. lemon fanfics I've found was on fanfiction.net and that was between Wendy&Joker. But you managed to combine my 2 favorite charecters! It's hard to find good junior and anita fanfics. I would love it if you continued
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Reviewed By: Sakura501367 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really really good you had a glitch a couple of times w/ the spelling but other than that you did a nice job plz continue!
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Reviewed By: RiaNightStar On: April 09, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED IT SO, it's hard to find a Junior and Anita story. I would LOVE it if you wrote a 2nd one or even continue this one.
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Reviewed By: =Perra= On: March 13, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed this because i think anita and jr. are a really good couple. I would love to see a second chapter and more. i loved it please wright more.
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Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 23:55 CST
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If you wanted to simply do it that way, where there's no 'text' in the chapter, and insted in the chapter disription, it makes me wonder if you're really serious about writing things of your own, or for that matter, a fan fic that isn't simply copy or pasted. You can't get me hooked on this fan fic, since I see only a intro full of stuff... nothing in the true story. I'm not going to read it, I'm sorry, but you shouldn't have done that, because all people will see is '5 words' and forget about it, so I sadly have to review those 5 words.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume (nsi) On: January 31, 2005 19:53 CST
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Yays! The first ROD lemon I found and it's to these cutie pies. I can tell you quite don't have the hang of posting here. lol. It's okay. I loved it, and would jump to see more! It's a bit of a shame tho that Junior seems to have a minor crush on Michelle in the series...Or maybe he likes a sisterly figure? Either way, I loved this piece.
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