| "Dreaming" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GaaraHinataWake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2013 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never even thought of this as a possible story, that was very clever of you. The idea that Malchior used Rorek as an example to gain Raven's trust is quite interesting. I always thought that maybe, just maybe the cold hearted dragon did feel something for Raven even if it was a little sense of gratitude because really if it wasn't for her then he wouldn't have even been able to be free for those few moments. Anyway very nice job with this story, it defiantly earns a spot in my favorites list :) |
Reviewed By: goddessruling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 02:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
AW! what a great idea and was executed perfectly! made me very happy as did your other stories. And I liked the scarf bit and I like how he cheered her up. But I do have to say...up to this point Rae's only boyfriends have been a dragon and a dream guy from hundreds of years before. Of course, she's not doing much worse than the rest...BB dated a traitor, Robin a creepy girl who liked to kiss spiders, Starfire almost married a glorg, and Cy's girlfriends were creepy ass Jinx, a woman from the TV, and a woman from 5000 years in the past. Wow, these people don't have good luck with relationships do they?
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Title: LOOOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: February 12, 2005 00:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I so loved this I wish you could make a sequel to this or like the frist reviewer said a second ch. Oh please? I have to sufer of no Rae/Ror and if you like BB and Rae and I say I am sorry for what I'm going to say next, I don't really like BB/Rae. I mean i can see it but I can see more in Rorek and Raven better. Well anyways I hope you write more stories like this one. Tokyogurl1
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Title: LOOOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: February 12, 2005 00:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I so loved this I wish you could make a sequel to this or like the frist reviewer said a second ch. Oh please? I have to sufer of no Rae/Ror and if you like BB and Rae and I say I am sorry for what I'm going to say next, I don't really like BB/Rae. I mean i can see it but I can see more in Rorek and Raven better. Well anyways I hope you write more stories like this one. Tokyogurl1
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Title: Very Cute!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 08:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is very well written and very cute! I loved it! I like it as a one shot, but can't help holding out for Ch.2...? Maybe something along the lines of a second chance for them? Maybe yes, maybe no? Oh, well...A girl can hope! :)
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