| "A Girls's Life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 14:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you read this review, i thing you fanfic its interesting and im full opf curisity to know how it ends, so please continue writing it or put how more or less is tha history so i can have an idea,please please please
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Title: Yea
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: April 25, 2005 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this...it looks really promising! And Please update soon!
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Title: Yea
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: April 23, 2005 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this...it looks really promising!
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Reviewed By: Kitty (Hellokitty_4_ever) On: January 23, 2005 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
She's scared Ganny doesnt find out and she thowns up. Seems like the poor girl's pregnant. But then...who does the kid belong to?? In the end of the eps,i believe, Ed went missing, so then who??? Oh well...I sound too stiff...Hehe sorry about that...Ok good begining now all you need to do is to start the story...hehehe. ^_^ Oh and for the enjoyment rating it's because It's just the beginning I don't know what to really think if it's good or bad so continue the fic and I'll most likely raise the rating. And when you update PLEASE send me an email telling me you updating because other wise i forget to check and you kinda lose a reader...But It's not my fault. Blame Richard. HE keeps on hitting me and trying to kill me. *just cause i broke 26 of his stupid chairs* And my email is Hellokitty_4_ever@msn.com Thankz soo much.
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Title: interesting ... *prologue*
Reviewed By: DG32173 *lazy* On: January 23, 2005 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is winry pregnant? that could explain the cause of the sickness. i wonder who's kid it is if she is. well, i think it's good, adn keep up the good work! ja ne!
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