| "Food Fetishes: Peppermint Stick" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...not so good on the grammar. You kept switching back and forth from past tense to present tense. But ^_^...everything else makes up for it.
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Title: WhiteWolf
Reviewed By: WhiteWolfOfIce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow at first I thought Kiba was going to fuck Yugi with the pepermint stick o-o but thats okay he got his jollies anyway XD. I think that was a good bite-o-pepermint goodness. I applaued, very well done. You might want to run spell check over the spelling though. *blinks* Teh heh =3
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 10:52 CST
Comment/Review:
You, You, You tease. How dare you? I thought it was real. It was soooo good. How could you? Sorry for the outburst. I just couldn`t believe it. You should have put teaser somewhere in there. Oh well. It was fabulous.
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Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: Princess_may(not logged in) On: January 30, 2005 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good story!
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Title: 4 Letters, O-M-F-G
Reviewed By: Allison On: January 28, 2005 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is OMFG- its that damn good! The best ever ever ever! Super job! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Mantha Kaiba On: January 25, 2005 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't stop there! I want to know more, I want every little bit of detail! I want to know how Yugis innocence is taken, is Kaiba nice and romantic towards him, or is he just going to do him hard and fast! I need to know! Pleeeease Update! I love you!
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: January 24, 2005 21:33 CST
Comment/Review:
OOO!! Continue I really enjoyed this. Strange way to start a yaoi fic. Great job with such an odd pairing.
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