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Title: everytime
Reviewed By: Jewel-shard queen On: March 05, 2005 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this was really cool. chapter four was amazing. i liked it a lot. please write the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Hun Wu On: March 02, 2005 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the conflict and everything but didnt like the ending
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Reviewed By: tai'daishar On: February 26, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know my name isn't japanese but i like it-i might change to 'HOTARU' in the future. cool 4th chap. i think i'm out of it today...or everyday...oh well, it was good. GAR! why are you reading this? get scribblin'!
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Reviewed By: Chelsea/ False On: February 22, 2005 19:40 CST
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Awesome story hahah I took the time to read it awesome!!!!Anyway yay! Great job Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! perfect. is inu gonna be ok? i hope so! i love the effect this story has on me. hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! perfect. is inu gonna be ok? i hope so! i love the effect this story has on me. hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:01 CST
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I always find it amuzing whenever InuYasha becomes a little less dense with his relizations that Kagome loves him. You would think that he is constantly living in a fog sometimes. But once again though I love an emotional Inu. Keep up the good work! Hopefully you won't have to fall this next time to get a good version of the story, cause then well we would have to wait longer for the next chapter!
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Title: Kikyo
Reviewed By: Kyo Yuki Shigure On: February 16, 2005 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Kayashi, it's me again.^^To all Kikyo haters,(especially to you, YUSHI). I'm a Kikyo fan but i do not hate Kagome either. You can hate her all you want or any characters for that matter. But just don't make her into something she's Not. I hve been to a few Kikyo hater sites and thier info of her is totally unjust and really one sided. They turned her into some type of sickly, evil girl who is out to het Inuyasha and Kagome. The #1 reason why people hate her so much is because she came between Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship. Others say it's because she's evil, and some says whe's dead, should remain dead, and has no business walking around. I'm going to tell you the first reason why you shouldn't hate Kikyo in this review. First of all,Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship has problem is because of Inuyasha, not Kikyo. Kikyo gave up on him, because she knows she is dead and can't go back to teh way thing was between them. she distanced herself from Inuyasha. Everytimes they ran into each other, she always end up leacing him behind. If she really wanted to break up Inuyahsa and Kagome, then she would have stick around and be part of the group. Then Kagome would be out of a job, since Kikyo can also sense teh jewel. so if you wnat to blame somebody, Inuyasha is a good start. That's all the reason i'm going to tell you for this review. My next review will be on really soon, so stay tune. P.S- Kayashi, you may have read this before so just control you anger.
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Reviewed By: Ryo Yuki Shigure On: February 16, 2005 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Kayashi, the first thing i want to say is that i really enjoy your story. Even when you brought Kikyo up and insulted her. Well, you already know that i am a Kikyo fan and you still want to make me mad. To all Kikyo haters out there, please read this very carefully, i want you to read my next review. It's all about why you shouldn't hate Kikyo. P.S- And to you Kayashi, I'll be reading every single chapter of your story to see if you ever bring Kikyo up and call her a b#%^$$^ again. Until then i would have to kill you in school. We like opposite characters then why do we get along so much. HMMM.... Anyway, your sister called you a hog. Ha Ha. (You are a hog) LLLOOOLLL.^^
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Reviewed By: That Thing On: February 13, 2005 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
InuYasha crying? That's not something you see every day... Hard to imagine too... Anyway, it's good, keep writing! (by the way, this is Tia, Taylor showed me your fic :D)
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Reviewed By: Tai' Daishar On: February 12, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sarah-please add to your story! (it's Taylor) that is a good fanfiction, and i usually don't really like reading them. it's sad! i seriously felt tears. Probably because i listen to the theme songs and they sound ever so sad. I really couldn't think up a name so if it's weird, it's from a book i read (non-anime) i can't guarantee when i'll be on to read it but i look forward to doing so! ciao!
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Title: kwl
Reviewed By: Ur sis On: February 09, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...better then i thought it would be...I told you i wouldnt write anything bad..lol...update...ill read it when u let me on the computer! gosh...hog...lol UPDATE!
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Title: wowsers
Reviewed By: kirara1234 On: February 09, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT! You should totally keep writing...your a great writer... kikyo should go to hell! anyways..update!
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Reviewed By: Le Stenning On: February 08, 2005 22:52 CST
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AWESOME! great job! keep writing! cant wait for the update! but waaaaaaah poor inu :( :(
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Reviewed By: Radical_Edward [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved it and you should totally update.
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