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Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude your story rocked! I really think you should continue the story because you sorta left a cliffhanger. but i know people have lives other than writeing fanfics.Anyway thanks for writeing the fic and if you can continue the story. thanks Leki =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Ezza Alch On: July 28, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ezza:... Ed: It was pretty drrn good! Ezza:... Ed: Oh and no I wont apologize to Ezza for doing ... That. You remember... (Ed's fantasy memory) Ed: That was the best masterpiece I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(*U*) Ezza: I was down-right awful. It makes me want to call Ed a shrimp. Ed pulls out an Armblade and deftly with one totally ****ING AWESOME move, he SLIGHTLY cuts Ezza. (What REALLY happened.) Ezza: That was EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ed: Feh. ( It sucked worse than roy.) Ezza: I read it as I ate some shrimp- Ed pulls out an armblade. He sloppily lunges at Ezza. HE misses. HE gets up and- *************************************************************************** *************************************************************************** ****************************************************************(Too gory to Write)********************************************************************* *************************************************************************** ******************************************************* (Back to reality) Ed: Good times. (Sigh) Ezza: ... (Falls over.)
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Title: everytime
Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_so_kool!!!! On: July 11, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story!!!Hurry and make another chapter please!!!!I can hardly wait!!!I will be waiting!!
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Reviewed By: .... On: June 01, 2005 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
...wow... ..."My mom even thought it was good"?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like this story!!! Please update, or I will hold you up against ypur will!!!
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Title: Good Luck!
Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 09:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well thanks for all that you did write it was very enjoyable. *sigh* I just wish that there was going to be more. Good luck with your finals and going through graduation. I know that part of your life can be stressing. Hope to see you posting again soon though!
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Reviewed By: your ed obsessed friend down the street On: May 25, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I loved it! So are you going to continue? And what is the deal with you people? over 1000 views and only 31 reviews! Geez, don't be lazy! Take a minute and review for 'kayashi's' own good. ok. c ya @ school ^.^ ~your edo-kun obsessed neighbor
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Reviewed By: Akamori On: May 01, 2005 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Crimson_Soul On: April 24, 2005 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story it's one of my most favorites even if it seems to go a little easy on Kagome. But please UPDATE soon i'm DYING here of suspense {:(
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Reviewed By: leah poo On: April 18, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story in the whole wild world, omg i love this story, it made me cry, boo hoo, i love inuyasha. he is so sexy.....yum yumo!!!!!!i loved it so much doggy poo
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Reviewed By: yuca/ thu On: April 13, 2005 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guess who's back! The story was pretty good to me even if you didn't put Kikyo in it ^^. And it also as cheesey as normal when it comes to Inuyasha and Kagome. Well I'm not really into Inuyasha anymore so I don't really care. It's getting too long to reach the ending. So good Job Kayashi, the story didn't really sound like the OOC so don't worry about it. Bye for now! P.S-I din't know Kagome have blue eyes!
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton* am i ever logged on?* On: April 09, 2005 20:25 CDT
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HURRYHURRYHURRYHURRYHURRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg omg! i can't beieve you updated!! thank you sooooo much... update soon... HURRY! LOL
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! I LOVED IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MaNOf ThEHoUse On: March 18, 2005 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an enjoyable fanfic and was made with a good original storline. Overall, great job
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Reviewed By: MaNOf ThEHoUse On: March 18, 2005 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an enjoyable fanfic and was made with a good original storline. Overall, great job
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