| "Painful Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Aylese1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Looking forward to your next update, it's really a good one.
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: saya89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 07:39 CST
Comment/Review:
hello!i wont says that yours fiction it appeals to to me ! it continues no? you can't leave it!it's terribol
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Title: ffrg-chapter 3
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good chapter. Very descriptive. I do not know the characters that well but I do know them a bit from what you have written. You capture the reader well and tell them what is going on in the story. The grammar and spelling are very good. This is a good story and I will definitely be reading more as you write it. Keep up the good work. Misslady
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Title: FFRG Review Ch 3
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting to FFRG! I'd like to say, firstly, that I enjoyed the chapter I read, and while I'm not familiar with either of your fandoms, I felt that the chapter was well-written so that I could get a decent grasp on the characters. I won't comment on characterization for the aforementioned reason, but I did like your descriptions and didn't feel that they were overdone or overworked. I got a good mental image of the happenings, and your writing style is quite ambient. The only things that I did notice were a few places were ellipses were used where it would have been more effective to use dashes or even a simple semi-colon. Overall, very cohesive, and very well-written, and I did enjoy the read! Thank you for submitting your work, and best of luck in your writing endeavors!
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Title: OLA
Reviewed By: SINDYME On: April 10, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE I LOVE HISOKA ANGS
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brutal and sadistic, but very well told. Very much in keeping with Muraki. Please hurry back.
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