| "The Sailor Scouts - Destiny for Love series" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kt On: November 19, 2005 21:53 CST
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hey these are great! i dont read many sailor moon fics but these are a group i may wanna keep in my faves cuz they're GOOD so keep it u pand i wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: Lindsey On: April 09, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic so far (only probaly is with the fading in and out of tenses, but I can read around the grammar mistakes). Very creative, I love the idea of Amy/Greg... keep adding on to this story, you have something great. Maybe the future chaps can have Lita/Ken and Raye/Chad.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:31 CST
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Great chapter. Please update soon!
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Title: Taro MD
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 11:47 CST
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Sorry if it seems rushed, I was trying to get her personality right and I hope I didn't get it wrong although it's rare to see a Sailor Venus lemon except for Sakura and the exploits of the Yarnspinner.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 17:45 CST
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This is a really good fic! Please write more!
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Title: Taro MD
Reviewed By: Taro M.D [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:38 CST
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Ok ok So I did rush it in certain places, it was only a test and thus I may not be the most talented writer out there, I do know where the story is going. I'll rewrite it later on in due time
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Reviewed By: DrunkenKisses On: February 18, 2005 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're too repetitive in most places, and the last part is cliche.
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: February 05, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fast-paced and rather rushed in some respects... Greg was somewhat two-dimensional a character and Amy, though IC, didn't show much past what we've already seen. She's losing her virginity, she might react with some hesitance and such... Other than those factors, the writing was good, the emotions as well, good structure and it had a nice flow. Not bad, my friend.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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