| "Just Desserts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: tiemiosho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mukuro's not a slut. I have no clue how you got that idea into your head. Models aren't usually skimpy bitches. My mom was a model and she's the most modest and selfless woman I know. Your OC doesn't seem like a likable character that I can sympathize with. She seems more like a whiny emo to me. OCs can be hard to write into a story correctly. Fortunately, I know a load of resources I can point you to that can help. I'm not flaming you; I'm helping you to write better quality fanfiction that all of us can enjoy reading. PM me if you have any questions. ~~Tiemiosho, crazed Mukuro fangirl.
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Reviewed By: Hikaru01 On: May 02, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! Pleaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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