| "Of Textbooks and Temptations" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: envy hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 23:53 CDT
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I loved it simple perfection. I loved how you changed Quatre's personality it works all to well. Please continue?
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Reviewed By: ExpressMail [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank Gods you live and write and breathe and make me happy. A story worth its salt is hard to find, but I think your age gives you wisdom that the fanfiction world needs. I love it. I truly do. I think you could work a bit on your descriptions-- instead of footnotes, put us in the situation and let us learn ourselves. But other than that I think you are doing an amazing job. Thank you for writing and I assure you I will be reading more.
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: XxShinigamixX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay write more NOW .... yes i am comanding you, beg for mercy!!!! mwahahaha okay i am done.... sorry.... please more????
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 22:49 CDT
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Hey, cool! Is Duo really going to leave his boyfriend? I tried to leave mine but it was easier said than done. We ended up breaking up anyways butit was still hard. Anyways, nice fic! Update soon!
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 10:49 CDT
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ROFL this is fantastic!! I absolutely love this fic, especially the relationships that Duo has with Quatre and Wufei. I think it's just so sweet. I'm looking forward to Duo's breakup with Walker... *hints madly* ^_^ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 13:22 CDT
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Please continue this for i am bored... and by the way, some of that sstuff happens in my high school (big campus, used to be a barracks)
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Title: Aya-chan
Reviewed By: AyatheWaterDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Duo and Quatre are so funny!! I like the way you shaped Quatre's persona! He's great! Kind of perverted, evil, and sadistic, but GREAT!! And you gotta love the blonde comments!
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Reviewed By: Naminei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly hilarious. I enjoyed how you made Quatre more outgoing and stayed away from the weak stereotype that many fanfics have. This was a very enjoyable read! Now, I must do what every other fanfic addict must... update soon! Lmao. ~Naminei
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Title: Original
Reviewed By: vox dei On: March 23, 2005 22:00 CST
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Although the college AU has been well-explored, I found your take on it original and very engaging. You made the characters OOC in a good way. I hope you will continue to work on this story. Great job, D (aquononascendet-AT-yahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 19:51 CST
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Hey what happens next? Does Duo leave his boyfriend for Heero or does he try to make it work? Update soon
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Reviewed By: ZeroSaotome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 00:45 CST
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(For some reason it won't keep me logged in to leave a review. X.x) Oh my god, I love this story. It toally reminds me of college, right down to all the annoying freshmen. X_x You're writing style is awesome, by the way, and I cannot wait for you to come out with your next chapter. Please update soon, I'm getting a great laugh out of this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this fic a lot. I really want to know what happens next. I'm excited! I like the real setting and how you modified the characters.
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Reviewed By: dragonkitty On: January 26, 2005 14:37 CST
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This is so good. I can't wait to see what happens next in this story. AU makes me happy inside^^
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Reviewed By: SPF15 On: January 25, 2005 16:12 CST
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Great fic. Some of the characters are OOC, but the writing is good and I find myself very much looking forward to whatever comes next.
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