| "Invisible Partner" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: cher1 On: January 25, 2005 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story plz will you updait later i cant wait to see what happens! And i love the surprise about what he says! Thanks for picking such hott carcters!
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Reviewed By: Orb On: January 25, 2005 14:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Way to go Danny, that was a great little story. I liked the concept, it was very original. I hope you get the time to update soon. Take care.
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