Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have a lot that I want to say. First of all, thank you for making the cat a Maine Coon. We have one! She's gray. Secondly...beautiful. Your description of the house--no, mansion--was beautiful. I think that there are a lot of people who like to call themselves writers, but skimp on description. I'm an analyser I love description. Thirdly, I'd like to say that this story felt almost like a movie. It came alive! Okay, I'm sounding like a gushing fangirl. Well, I guess I am. Anyway, we both know the main reason why I'm reviewing this thing--the main reason why I read this thing--is obvious: Smut. Come on! Yaoi fangirl, here.
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