| "Lines" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: keep up the good work
Reviewed By: ganymaedes On: September 02, 2005 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Naruto's behaviour. This is the first fic I've read where Naruto is dominating, but yet at the end of the story he is so gentle towards Neji. Cool fic. I like it.
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Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayness!!! That was sooooo kewl!!! ^___~ Lol, I really liked it -- clever, sexy, and very well written!!! I was a bit confused at the end, though....did Naruto's statement mean that they were still "together"? ^^ Nevermind, it was still really good.....keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Kiba-chan (too lazy to log in) On: February 20, 2005 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool :) I really want to know who the footsteps were... it's nice to read a fic where Neji's alive :)
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