| "Ich Liebe Dich" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 23:08 CDT
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Title: SWEEETT!!!
Reviewed By: imayasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome lemony-fic. Aside from the citrus, I really liked the plot. It was funny, serious, and one of those moments you go, "awwwwwww!!" Keep writing; I wanna see more! :D
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 15:08 CDT
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I loved it..wish ya didnt stop there...i love wolf's rain...wish you'd continue...
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Title: Really good until the mary sue reared her ugly head
Reviewed By: Kuroi-san On: July 12, 2005 07:55 CDT
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I think my title does most of the talking, but let me elaborate. I found the character's completely off, and I won't bother running some checks of Wolves to see if the males go into heat, because who knows, I might be wrong thinking they don't. I thought this was going to be a nice, interesting, smutty PWP. Until of course, near the end of the chapter you inserted your mary-sue. And what a mary-sue she was. I gagged on my liquid sippings and proceeded to shoot myself. Apart from that obvious problem; the characters were a tad weird. As in, what anime are they supposed to be from? I found them not at all anything even remotely resembling the wolves in Wolf's Rain. I digress and give you points for reeling me in with good writing style. Well done. Please put a mary-sue warning on the summary however, I don't like gouging my eyes out half-way through what could have been a decent story.
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Reviewed By: SpiritOfMonkey On: May 12, 2005 17:44 CDT
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i read what you have up and i must say that this story is great.i love the little hint of hige/kiba. there soud be more of them. i also like how toboe is domminate*is that spelled right?* and tsume isn't. it great. i would really like to see what happen next. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: law916 On: May 09, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say you did a great job. I really enjoy the way you told your story. I really hope that you will make a part two. I would like to see how the relations between Tsume X Toboe grows and if Kiba and Toboe can repair their relationship. I would also like to see what happen when the boys(Tsume X Toboe) meet up with other wolf now that have claim each other as mates
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Reviewed By: ahorse(offline) On: April 14, 2005 16:19 CDT
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You had a good grasp of humour in this fic, i liked it.Great for a first timer! Keep writng!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 20:11 CST
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Yes, very good. Very sweet, too. Heh, I've written *thinks* 4? and my most recent isn't half as good. The wolves did react very strongly to the fight...City wolves, right? The first two chapters were hilarious. (The other ones were just as good, but they were more serious.) I liked the thing with Kiba and Hige too, *laugh* although that pairing wouldn't work in this ficcy. Is it done? Poor Kiba's still alone. *grabs Kiba* Any how, it was awesome! Just one thing- where you say stuff like "Toboe did this, and Tsume too," it works better to say "Both Toboe and Tsume did this." I hope that made sense... ^_^
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Reviewed By: AspirinForYourHeadache [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:47 CST
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AWESOME! AWESOME, AS USUAL! CAN'T WAIT TO GET IT UP ON MY SITE!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 21:18 CST
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I love this and hope that you do more. The lemon was great. Very in depth, so to speak.
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've a right to be proud! ^ ^ Very nice indeed!
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