| "Operation Sex: REDONE" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 22:51 CST
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I forgot to mention something. I think that the part where Inuyasha admitted that he was illiterate should have been more sappy. I mean like have him depressed that he never got the chance to learn or maybe his mother read him stories and said stuff like "One day, you'll be able to read too." or something.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There wasn't any Miroku/Sango lemons in your original, so I think if you put one in, that would help. Oooohhhh, maybe have Inuyasha in a threesome with Kagome and her mother. Maybe put in some Kouga/Kagura, and if your going to have Shippou get laid, please pair him with Souten the little thunder demoness.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 17:29 CST
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Ok, that even confused me...so, can he read or can't he? Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 17:24 CST
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Excellent chapter. A lot of unison people, ne? So, they escape the horrors of Rin once again, lucky them! In that case I think I'm staying single... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 17:16 CST
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Excellent chapter. Hey! I ressemble that comment! We're not all that bad...well on second thought maybe their right. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 17:04 CST
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Hurrah! *Waves flags with dead Kouga on them* He really was a pain wasn't he? No more trying to steal Kagome now wolf boy! Ha ha ha ha ha ha! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 16:58 CST
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I have not idea... Interesting dream, ne? Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 16:51 CST
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So, she finally broke him huh? Poor Inuyasha... Excellent chapter. I wonder what will happen when the guys wake up? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 16:46 CST
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Uh...I don't know what to say again... That was great! I can't believe he actually thought of something that clever! Faking delusions to keep Kagome from going back to her time! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 16:41 CST
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Somehow I don't think this is going to end well... So, let's see... 1. Sesshomaru is running away from Rin because she wants to spank him ebcause he swore after talking to himself signalling he is insane 2. Inuyasha and Miroku are trying to ensnare their respective prospective mates into a bout of nocturnal activities What more could you ask for! Absolutely fantastic! Can't wait to see how it all backfires! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 27, 2005 15:58 CST
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Fantastic chapter! Poor, poor Inuyasha...spanked by Rin as well... Id on't know what to say...I loved it. Especially when we discovered the other three hiding in the bushes, perverts! Geez, is anyone not a pervert apart from the kiddies and Sesshomaru (Sesshomaru a pervert...no, that's just too strange ^_^;) Ok, off to the next chapter now. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: GREATNESS!!
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA! THIS IS GREAT! The grammar is also MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH better. Geez, I almost pissed my pants laughing. This story never gets old!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 26, 2005 18:05 CST
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Oh god! Sesshomaru getting spanked by Rin! It's just too much! *Slumps in chair from too much laughing* That was absolutely incredible, poor Inuyasha...I can see a dose of certain herbs coming his way some time in the near future... He almost killed Miroku the one time he was innocent...I'm half suprised Sango didn't go to his rescue... Ok, I'm going to have to stop there. It's late and I have a course come morning. I will read the others asap, looking forwards to seeing what more new features are in store. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 26, 2005 17:50 CST
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Well...the world will always wait just a little longer...that way if you fail at least you go happy! That was really cruel of them all to trick Inuyasha like that, they are so lucky that he didn't remember. The asprin was amusing but I suspect that caffine is going to be better! Poor Inuyasha, he just can't catch a break can he? I wonder what would happen if someone fed those things to Sesshomaru...that would be something I would love to see! Moving on to the next one now, I have to admit after reading the seocnd one I am starting to remember more of it, I look forwards to seeing what new scenes you have added. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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