| "White Arms" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was really good.... it kinda helped me understand more of what inuyasha feels for kikyo and why its hard for him to let her go. It was beautifully written great job!!!
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Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderfully written, really and a bit sad, even though he still has true love. I feel bad for Kikyou, poor thing. Anyway, great job!
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Reviewed By: DizzySweetDreams On: October 20, 2005 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just got done reading Bearers... This piece isn't too bad either. I like your style. Keep up the writing. (pretty please)
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written!!!! That was was just beautiful, it almost made me think of Kikiyou differently, almost.
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Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 02:02 CDT
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This was very surprising, having read your other pieces. Nice.
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Reviewed By: ShagsChain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 01:13 CST
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i love the way you painted kikyou. great transition from her to kagome.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 05:20 CST
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This was so beautifully written! Simple, sweet, and so poignant. My only question - and this is one that I wonder all the time - is this? Just how long did Inuyasha and Kikyou know one another? I know in the anime, it's depicted as if they're together almost throughout the four seasons. Now that I'm reading the manga, I'm getting the sense that the time frame was actually shorter...but I can't say for certain yet. Do you have a better sense of it than I do? I really would love for someone to tell me.. But given what I know from the anime, you've done a beautiful job of condensing the emotions of Inu-Kik's relationship and the saving grace Kagome is for Inuyasha. Again, just beautiful!
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