| "Only a Crush?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: vampxangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i luved it!! so org. so if ppl r flaming it, just try to brush it off and ignor them. (that kinda worked for me). Just a suggestion, not trying to sound like a jerk, but yea i know how u feel... cant wait 4 more.
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Reviewed By: ccSIne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm...hmmm...i like the writing style but you should hev selected the category of romance for this fic. it seems more romantic rather than a hentai fic. as for originality and enjoyment factor, it was fairly enjoyable and original. On a personal note, i have also wondered what would happen if minaru-san and his persocom got together because there were hints of it in the manga and the only reason that he seemed to not want to get involved was because his persocom resembled his sister both in looks and personality. Good fic overall
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Reviewed By: Hellstar_17 On: September 28, 2005 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow. i read a similiar story like this on fan fiction. but yours is alright. keep up the good work. if i were you. you should really make the update faster so you can keep all your fans entertain and also keep them. some fans get tired of waiting and just move one and forabout this or find something better.
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Reviewed By: Kinokomushroom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what your talking about, but my first lemon was like that, so no worries. I liked your story a lot. I ahve always thoght of similar stories having to do with Minoru and Yuzuki together. *sigh* how cute. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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Title: crazy denial
Reviewed By: AyameFay On: June 03, 2005 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally love you fanfic for it being you first lemon it was great you really did good
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Title: im writing this because i think you need advise...
Reviewed By: fallen_heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey...im a fellow writer...for me its good...FOR NOW!!!i mean if your gonna make a lemon fic...you need to make them do it...you must do the next chapter faster because if im just a normal fan i get old on waiting and i tell you fans are not good at waiting...i like the sequence-thing your using...again...if your not gonna make this a real lemon my advise it just change it to romance...well i wish you like my advise...just keep up the good work...im also waiting for thatnext chapter...okay...p.s. if i were you ill make a flash back of minoru developing his feelings...you now...a scene where he starts to wonder about himself...remember NEXT CHAPTER... -fallen_heaven
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Reviewed By: Mimiru16@aol.com On: May 28, 2005 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! KEEP IT UP! IT IS VERY VERY CLEAVERLY WRITEN! Very good! I truly love it. ^_^ ~~~ Mimiru16
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Reviewed By: BlueDragonGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Well written. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Sukiam6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know....it was OK, the writing wasn't that bad but I've seen better, I would suggest that you check over your finished copies a few times before you upload your chapters. Oh...and well I found the fact that minoru developed feelings for yuzuki a bit strange considering that she was made for him to remeber....his sister of all people. ...also the whole concept of a person having relations with a robot just kinda freaked me out.
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