| "Hunter's Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: MadWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You still need to work on your spelling, it's horrible. Damn good story though ~raises beer and tip's cloak~ Long time no see
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Title: Keep 'em comin' dude
Reviewed By: DigiRanma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You saw the title of the review, now get that chapter out! I like it, I like it.
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Reviewed By: MW On: September 06, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You might want to go back and read it I founded a few missed place words, as well as some missing. Other then that the mix is quite intresting and I did enjoy reading it, I look forward on reading the next one. btw when the other two stories getting more work on em? -thanks
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Title: Great idea
Reviewed By: metaletemon27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks to me like you've set up another radical universe where anything could happen. I love stories like that. You should throw in some zombies and demons in the future. Also, the digidestined as vampires is a great take on the Lost Boys. Keep it up!
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Title: Special Privilages
Reviewed By: Phoenix Hoshika [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Hope this review title made you and few others sweat drop. ^_~) I'll e-mail you with all the rest I have to say, but you did a good job. Just do a reread to fix those grammar errors. Hm, I better explain my ratings. ^_^' Style of writing: You're writing style is fun though a slight sadistic at times, so 10. Spelling and Grammar: Spelling really wasn't the issue but there were a few run on sentences and things that made me have to stop and go "what the heck?", so 8. Originality/Creativity: Just because you used a lot of other fan fic author's characters. I wouldn't pay attention to this rating too much I mean this is a fan fiction, so the use of other people's characters is a given. The story/plot seems to be original though, so 9. I would rather have given a 9.5 to be honest Enjoyment Factor: Well you know how I feel about humanizing demons :p, so yeah... 9 (believe me that is a great considering my personal bias.) Overall Rating: Based on all the above. Whew! After all that can you believe I have more to say? Raven: She would not make false promises. She may get a little carried away when dealing with "creatures of the night" but she would never promise to let them go, lie or no. The blood: Almost like a scene from Kill Bill (which I think may be a rival to Battle Royale in the bloody department.) Not a gripe or a compliment, it's more of an observation. Sigh...
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Brian Smiley On: January 29, 2005 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens all around. You did a great job continuing where I got cut off due to the problems this site had a couple of years ago. Keep up the writing.
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Reviewed By: Gamefreak3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fanfic! The werewolf fight was really, really cool! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Nenagh24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
"A crazy girl from England"? Brilliant! No guessing from me then though...::Sigh:: Wait, was Joe turned? If not, does he know about the rest of them? ::Curious:: Great plot, once more! How do you crank these things out so fast?
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