| "Almost Perfect" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Jin Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 23:44 CDT
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Hey- Great story! I'm really enjoying it; your descriptions are amazing! Keep up the good work, and update soon!-Jin Ryu
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Reviewed By: purple1 On: March 20, 2005 22:19 CST
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great story girl(or boy)keep writing
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Title: Almost Perfect
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 19:26 CST
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Quit making excuses for not writing you lazy bum! Don't blame your teacher!! No, I'm joking^^ In fact, I should probably get to my homework now too >.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: krity_kat On: March 08, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lov it! love it! cant wait to read wut happens next! please update really soon ooooooo cant wait cant wait!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowy!! i luv this story!! it has an amusing and intriguing storyline, and i wish to read more from you!
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Title: Almost Perfect
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 15:47 CST
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That was awesome! I hope you update real soon, I know where this is going, of course, but I wanna know how^^
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Title: nifty :-)
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While not a completely unique idea, it seems you could take this to many different places. And that's what counts :-) Pretty good on grammar, enough description, though we don't have a really great grasp on her characterization (no real indepth thoughts of hers) I still can get the picture, and it seems like you know what you're doing. I can't wait for an update - hopefully soon???
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: January 31, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please the chapters are so short and you only do one a day , didnt you write out the whole story before putting it up? that is what you are suppose to do , or that is what i think people should do , and dont give up on your story to many people do that and then no-one knows how it ends and it really pisses me off . Update please and great story so far keep it up!!! Foxfire_14 mediaminer member
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Reviewed By: HappyBunnyBabe On: January 31, 2005 15:57 CST
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YAY!!!!!! You updated!!! PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *turns on music, jumps on table and starts strip dancing!!!*
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Reviewed By: HPB On: January 31, 2005 11:58 CST
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Cool. Feel free to update now. I mean it. Don't want me getting all bipolar on your ass no do ya? Huh? Well do ya PUNK?
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Reviewed By: bscl43nli On: January 26, 2005 23:22 CST
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You've got a really great start here. I think it could shape up into a good story. You might want to try and use more details. Take your time and develop a scene. You don't have to spend three paragraphs on the waiter, but something to give the reader an ideal of what the world looks like to you. So keep writing, i'll be waiting for more.
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Title: Almost Perfect
Reviewed By: Baby Red On: January 26, 2005 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! Love how Kagome messes with the boys! I laughed real hard!
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Title: Almost Perfect
Reviewed By: Dark Soul On: January 26, 2005 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story!! Please update!! Cant wait to see Inuyasha and the others!!!
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Reviewed By: renatanocis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Interesting... I like how you've written Kagome, and I can't wait to see Inuyasha! Are all the canon characters going to be in this, or just some? I'd love to see Miroku, Sango, and Shippou. ~renata
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