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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww.... that's the nicest way i've read Kikyo letting go of InuYasha well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 15:10 CST
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Noooooo, it ended darn i was hoping it would go on and on. oh well great so far can't wait for a new chappy, see ya. Zirra
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 23, 2005 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, restrained affection and supportive bond that washes back and forth instinctively between Kagome and Inuyasha, the entire group. Shippou is his playful self as always...nicely characterized,as were the previous chapters. Yes, you are making the readers "suffer" re:I/K finally coming clean. I'd also appreciated the peaceful resolution to Kikyou's fate; she was dealt a bad hand in life...and reanimation, though took her awhile--and Kagome's overwhelmingly positive influence--to overcome these. Ooooo, foreshadowing; Kagome, what have you done, what not addressed from your wish? Reading this story whilst listening to apropos Inuyasha tracks intensifies the episodic air of your writing. :) Nice job!Looking fwd to more upon your return...healthy and as whole as is possible.--Washuu Hanyou
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Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 12:47 CST
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What a poignant chapter, and a nice reversal where Kagome's sleeping with her head on Inuyasha's lap; very sweet. (but...will he ever tell or indisputably demonstrate to her--never mind; author's prerogative, but you are aware you're killing your readers w/the suspense by inches, right? LOL) Every word, line screams "episode!"--thank you for that authentic feel reverberating off the pages. Sango, Miroku, Shippou--ah, love this. Best wishes for surmounting upcoming medical difficulties--you'll make it, you'll be strong. :)
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Reviewed By: IdiotGirl222 (not signed in) On: March 16, 2005 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a great story I really hope to read more soon! Keep up the great work!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 16, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what are you getting surgery for? well anywho i loved the update keep up the good work and update when you can! ^____^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 22:30 CST
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Thank you for the new chapters. I have enjoyed reading them and look forward to seeing more of your story.
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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.... keep up the good work and update again soon please? i hope this sotry is long from over!!!!! ^_^ update update update!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: February 15, 2005 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great Inuyasha got drunk with Mirkou!!! ^_^ keep up the good ork and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is unfolding beautifully,with the characters radiating off the pages as themselves. Heh, now we have to get Inu drunk to lower his guard round his beloved Kagome? This latest chapter left me with the warm&fuzzies...hoping more updates will soon be posted. Thanks for an enjoyable read so far! :) PS:Hope that "family emergency" was satisfactorily resolved. :(
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 03:26 CST
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Just found your story and I'm really enjoying it! I don't know why more people aren't reviewing, maybe they're just lazy... k, so I do it too, but this time I didn't!! Anywhos, I really like your story and can't wait to read the next chappie!!
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Title: awwww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 12, 2005 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was funny keep up the good work and update soon please? this is a good fanfic i can't wate to read more of it! ^_^
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Title: awww.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 11, 2005 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww... why does Inuyasha have to be such a jerk?.......welll great fic so far keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: nancey1 On: February 10, 2005 17:07 CST
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I think your story is good so far and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 09:55 CST
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I am enjoying your story and I hope to read more soon. Please update. Thanks!
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