| "Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is sooooooo effin awesom!!! pleeeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeeee update soon.
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Reviewed By: musikmajor On: March 15, 2005 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely written story. AND HOW DARE YOU LEAVE OFF IN A PLACE LIKE THAT! >_< That was mean. You had better get the next exciting chapter up soon or else there will probably be trouble.....heh just kidding. But please do post the next chapter ASAP. Auf Wiedersehen!
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Title: ::gawk::
Reviewed By: Dancing Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::gawk:: ... O.O ... That was very good! X3 But I really didnt see what Naruto did coming! But that made it even better! XD ( Yesh, I know I be a perv.. ) That was just plain aweshome. And the last line.. If that wasn't sexual I dun know what is. LOL I cant wait fer the next chappie! Bai~! ~Lina & her muses
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