| "Brothers of the Fang" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Vumpler On: July 10, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated for a long time. Why? I was really enjoying this fic. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Baku-Chan On: January 29, 2005 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic needs some work to make it polished (final) I think that if you get in more practice writing then you could improve a great deal. The story went very fast and there wasn't a strong plott going. If you put in more detail and less OOC then this could have the potential to be a good fic. Keep practicing. Baku-Chan ^_^
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