| "Just Shoot Me: The Return of H.U.G.S." Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 18:44 CDT
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Love this story and I see you put a couple of OCs. Sapphire is also my yami's name!! Cool!!! I wish I can be in this fic and have fun with the YGO cast!! Please continue! ~Jacquelyn
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Reviewed By: Teh Kirby On: March 06, 2005 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is -the- funniest YGO fic I've ever read! I about died reading Yami and the camel meat...XD! You must do more! This is great!
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: March 03, 2005 23:17 CST
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oh my god!! I'm dying of laughter here! More more! And glad sapphire isn't out of the picture yet. Oh, god...that part with bakura and ryou's dancing....And then Anzu going to kill everyone with an electric drill! lmao!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(not logged in) On: March 03, 2005 19:56 CST
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STRIPPERS! YES!I love the various millenium items. ^^ Truth or Dare! Everyone does truth or dare. At a party that Kaiba throws at his mansion because his brother Mokuba blackmailed him with his diary. =3 You know something's wrong when you have more than fifteen thousand stories with the SAME EXACT STORYLINE. Oh wait, Kaiba's not going to be here... I don't suppose you could still fit in a goth Mokuba in there? And Yugi has to cross-dress! Or he's actually a girl. And the support group? Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: `Daebird On: March 03, 2005 16:17 CST
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How weird is it that I know I wrote atleast five lines of review and only first sentence showed? Anyway, I shall adopt the one on Pegasus' daughter. Just b/c it is soso morbidly cute (and b/c seto's in it,but that's our secret). Plus, this chapter rocked; Yugi and Ryou stripping was just stunning as well as the support group. I could just hear Yami's heart stopping. lol. Keep writing, I have to see the Yami pranks.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: February 24, 2005 15:02 CST
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This is awesome... Yugi is definitely more evil than Yami could ever hope to be! Keep it up, girl! But why the sudden ditch of Sapphire?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and very funny. I find it very enjoyable
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Reviewed By: 'Deabird On: February 23, 2005 18:20 CST
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I would totally adopt one!!! Lol, i forgot about Jou's kidnapping.>
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Title: Interesting!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 11:40 CST
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I like this fic. I like the idea of having a strip club. I have to agree with Malik with that idea. Mai can be the only slut and Anzu... they can just kill her for all I care. My idea is that the hikaris can be the strippers and the yamis except that Yami is the bar tender can throw money at them. Well,hope you continue this fic and this is interesting. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: 'Deabird On: February 12, 2005 23:48 CST
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Yami was simply priceless in this chapter, with friends like that, who needs enemies? Especially the segment about camel meat..lol! Glad you liked my idea -bows-. Oh, don't forget to bring Yami's lovers, sisters, daughters etc from the past in egypt, i should like to see that. I wonder if you can persuade Kaiba to put on an egyptian costume...
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Title: Just Shoot me
Reviewed By: shuicinobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH! You've gotta hurry up and update! I love your stories, and I just finished reading all four so far. I can't wait until the next part of this and the trilogy comes out.. Where's Jou?!
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: 'Deabird On: January 28, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay, so it's finally up! Heh, truly, whoever said hikari's were good? Ah, there are too many cliches in every fandom, an OC is found on the side of the street by a character, who takes him/her in and falls for him/her simply b/c he can. Yugi being forced to go clubbing and Yami, the bartnder in leather armor.
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 23:57 CST
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Eh, that's ok. I've finally figured out my own way of leaving reviews: sign in first. Sign in again. And don't go through your email to read the fanfiction first if you intend to leave a review whatsoever. Otherwise, disconnect from your internet, sign in (again?), and then go from there. :) Anyways, I have nothing to say on bad fanfictions on the moment. I'm desperately avoiding them (think covered in blanket in dark room, suspiciously staring at computer which had already been thrown out the window many many moons ago). But anyways, I just wanted to tell you that I'm so looking forward to how this little story of yours goes. I was laughing my ass every few lines! And then hearing what the hikaris were planning before settling on the fanfiction idea was beyond great! As usual: Hurry up and update the loverly fic!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 21:12 CST
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Well this is very interesting! I love your stories so I know i'll be hooked on this one too. I have no idea about the cliche part..i'm not good at coming up with those right away..but good luck with that! Can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess suffers from laziness On: January 27, 2005 21:00 CST
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Ahh, I can tell you're going to have fun with this one. Cliches? Hmmm... slutty mindless bitchy Anzu, slutty and vain to the point where one could be ruthlessly stabbed in front of her eyes, and she'd worry more about her nails Mai, ummm... this should be easier. -- hmm...Bakura is raping Ryou, Malik is a stripper(ok, mostly in AU. And not really a cliche. Malik should become a stripper anyways. =P), and pixie sticks. That's enough for now. ^^ This sounds great, I can't wait! (whee, i rhymed!)
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