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| "Just Shoot Me: The Return of H.U.G.S." Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: `Daebird On: July 07, 2005 10:43 CDT
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That was a fitting ending. Very fitting. ^^. Indeed it was Bakura's one chance at getting at the Pharaoh. Babies are devious... And I loved Yugi the next morning, who ever thought he'd take Yami seriously. Still, I like to think he learned a valuable lesson even if it doesn't mean he won't try again. It was a wonderful ficlet. Thank you for writing. ^^
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 01, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Oh yeah! Do the epilouge! I would love to see just how many cliches and which ones you used throughout just 8 chapters of this!
| Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: July 01, 2005 12:40 CDT
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My god! That was beautiful! I was so sad to see that it was over... Maybe a sequel (or, if Rabbit, Rabbit, Rabbit is the prequel to this, then a third)? That was so great, the whole way through. Sorry for not reviewing, but I was still in my lazy-arse stage. >P ~Goes and re-reads teh revenge~
| Title: Teh Overallness
Reviewed By: Teh_Kirby (not signed in, so sue me...wait don't! I'm a fanfic writer too!) On: July 01, 2005 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Couldn't remember if I saw any spelling mistakes, but I'm not that great with grammar myself...so you can up that thing to 10 then! I absolutely died laughing when Yugi went evil in the bathroom getting the two clean. XD! Loved how ya ended it too! Overall, I think my favorite aspect of this fanfic was how you had such in characterness for the OOC parts for the characters! XD! (say that 10 times fast) It was really great, and a VERY original story (hard to come by in YGO ff, really), and I deeply enjoyed it! I know I'll come back later and re-read this again...and again...etc.
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 06:04 CDT
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Great update. Yami is not innocent by any way, shape or form. I think kissing and making up are good ideas. I would love to see the Yami's in a group and see if their no kill rule would actually work. Update soon, please!
| Reviewed By: DemonandGodess is so freaking lazy On: June 30, 2005 21:44 CDT
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Now see, now we have a perfect ending, I like that. ^^ Love the chaos! Mess and gloop and OMG THE CHIBIS ARE SO CUTE. "I a `ami, you be nice." SQUEE. XP I read too much fanfiction, which may be why I noticed all dem cliches. Speaking of fanfiction, I haven't been reviewing Psyche. *shakes head* How awful. I need to go read-- like, right now.
| Reviewed By: `Daebird On: May 14, 2005 14:27 CDT
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Lol. That was a hell of a chapter. You were so evil to Duke and Ryou and to everyone in general. I love it. And so we're up to chibis eh, I'm not even going to count all the cliches. Chibis...I wouldn't put it past Yami to take advantage of the dimunitive thief king. ^-^. Anyway, keep writing and I shall wait for the Yami/Seth story for if you hold off Psyche any longer, you might have a mob riot on your hands.
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess continues to be lazy On: May 12, 2005 22:45 CDT
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mwahahahahaha, nice. Interesting use of olives. Well, let's see, in this chapter we have Spin the Bottle, Spin the Bottle with the stakes increased, Ruby, Sapphire liking sick and twisted, though that may just be another Mary Sue thing, rum(one of the most widely used alcoholic drink in fanfiction, along with vodka and scotch, I believe), CHIBIS!(I love Chibi Ryou and Bakura, so that's one cliche I can live with), and...hmmm. I've never heard of Spin the Bottle with kiss ratings, so I don't think that's a cliche... Ruby appearing out of nowhere counts as one, I think.... hmmm... NO. No ultimate cliche, please. I'd like you to get back to Psyche, but cliff hanger ending will destroy me. So, please, no. Will camp out at my computer till thee next returns!
| Reviewed By: Teh_Kirby (not signed in, so sue me...wait don't! I'm a fanfic writer too!) On: May 12, 2005 14:55 CDT
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WOW girl! I didn't even have time to review your last chapter before the one that just came out (part 7 I believe "Spin the Bottle"). As for the cliches...I bet you've done just about every single one in the YGO universe...and almost all the ones you can find in general. Heh, I feels so bad for Yugi. I hate when he's sad! T_T! Tis okay Yugi! I can't wait to see what he'll do when he figures it out...>D He can be evil when he wants too! Another great chapter...XD! Kudos, lady!
| Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fic. I don't want it to end. Poor Yugi but he kind of deserves it. Great job!
| Reviewed By: 'Daebird On: May 08, 2005 11:45 CDT
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Oh poor sweet Yugi! I'm guessing Malik and Ryou are in on it? Needless to say, I adored this chapter and everyone's antics. Sapphire...the wench...is so wonderful, despite the fact that I'm supposed to dislike her. And Mokuba, omg! lol. Anyway, Spin the Bottle, ah this should indeed be much fun. And you should totally do the Yami/Seth story. After Psyche of course, or the suspense will kill me. Hell, you've inspired me, I'll do one too. XD Also check out Born to Servitude and Rebirth of the Damned on ff. The fluffiest R rated Seto/Seth/Jou ever.
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(lazy) On: May 06, 2005 22:35 CDT
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Ahhh, so you aded a Ruby? How wonderfully horrible. when you begin hearing far off shrieks off pain, that's me. And Goth Mokuba! Ha! I love it. Spin the Bottle's coming up... >:) Poor li'l Yugi...
| Reviewed By: `Daebird On: April 11, 2005 18:32 CDT
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Well, what's teh fun of writing when you can't get crazed reviews. I'm not too down about it, but thanks anyway. ^^ And as usual, this chapter was hysterical, you have my envy as to how you can write angst and comedy side by side and still make it appear so wonderful. The Sennen Mirror and Ruby as a Yami, wow you went all out neh? I loved it! And I shall indeed have fun with my Mary-Sue, I think I'll name her Amethyst with a sexy body, leather outfit yet hidden scars of pain and despair. Even if I still don't get how one can wear leather with open scars. And for the record, I think the Pharaohs kept the Puzzel b/c they have to keep themselves occupied with mindgames rather than venturing out to the evil world of camel meat. Or maybe since the other items are one piece, only the puzzel was available for Yugi to solve and become the chosen one. He's probably the only one who got his in a non-violent manner.
| Reviewed By: Teh_Kirby [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 21:00 CDT
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XD! Only Yami would get back by using his "foes" own plan against them! Good ol' Yami, eh? *DON'T TELL HIM I SAID THAT! I'll never let him know I actually like him... >.>'* But anyway, I really enjoyed your style during the "M. Mirror Crisis;" you had a way of putting in "mindless" details (like the "brown-mush" of a banana that Honda tripped on, XD) that just contributed to the overall hysterical factor! You have a talent! GO with it!
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess is lazy On: April 09, 2005 20:46 CDT
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I love Yami. ^^ I hate Sapphire(as I should), but I XDDDDDD I love this.
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