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Reviewed By: mojop [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 19:50 CST
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did you abandon this?!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy[[not currently online]] On: July 11, 2005 21:30 CDT
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I started reading this months ago. I've just now got around to finishing it...And I must say, you write with excellent imagery.I love your violent lemons.I do hope you update soon... I find myself wanting to know how Inu Yasha and Kagome will fight each other next.Lovely.
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Reviewed By: kissy88 On: April 12, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update!;]
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Reviewed By: mojopp On: April 05, 2005 21:24 CDT
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I just wanted to say that while reading your newest chapter I was reminded of a song I think you should all listen to! It really goes with this chapter! It's called Lover I Don't Have to Love by Bright Eyes. Check it out and you'll know what I mean.
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Reviewed By: BABEPIG On: April 05, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really cute dramtic story, you write really good this story is really original and it makes you want read some more. Your story really doesn't suck like you may think it is. Compared to other fic out there this story is great. i'm shocked that it's not really that read and reviewed like it should be. Anyway not ot bore you with my chatter update soon ~ Babe
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Reviewed By: GIENE On: April 05, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U R A GREAT AUTHOR LOVE TO READ SOME MORE OF THIS STORY, I HAVE ONE QUESTION IF INU'S DAD WORKS WITH KOUGA ISN'T INU RICH TOO. HE CAN LIKE PAY TO HELP KAGS OUT WITH HER BRO BEING SICK AND ALL. LOVE YA UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: LOVERLOVER2 On: April 05, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE. UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: LOVERLOVER2 On: April 05, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE. UPDATE SOON
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Title: GREATSTORY
Reviewed By: HannahBananna On: April 05, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it's awesome. I love how you write you express the emtions the characters are going through really good. I would recommend this story to everyone who loves a great fic. I can see alot happening for this story, Like I said I love it. Keep it Up! can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: wonderful!
Reviewed By: mojopp On: April 04, 2005 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a great writer! You use wonderful writing technique like metaphors and symbolism, and it really helps make your writing great! The story is wonderful and I really want to know what happens next! Also, I wanted to mention that, though rare in fanfiction, your spelling and vocabulary are great! Wonderful job! OH! and I don't know if I've put enough emphasis on this, but I already feel a connection with the characters! I really can't wait to see how the story developes! WONDERFUL! Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: March 27, 2005 13:05 CST
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cool story! and I can understand your want for reviews! it's what makes an update worth! your story is great! full of tension, a great plot, and the describing of the feelings awesome! continue!
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Reviewed By: IAmTheBatman On: March 27, 2005 11:13 CST
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this is a good story. not many inuyasha fics are as original as yours. and i dont review many stories that i read. this story creates a mysterious atmosphere in this story. maybe if you'll update sooner you'll got more reviews.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13(NSI) On: February 24, 2005 19:26 CST
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Great story! Love the plot and the story was very well written. I can't wait for your next update!~Peace!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: February 24, 2005 14:45 CST
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update update update!
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 04:02 CST
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hey! me again! i liked your second chapter more than the first! it brought us more into the characters and showed us more of their lives! however, you still keep what comes next in a secret, and i love it! but if you keep writing like that, than you'll have to update soon, cause there's only so much tension i can take!!
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