| "Teacher's Pet" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no matter how many times i read this story it never ceases to amaze me. i love it forever and always. ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the plot of this story, it was very well thought out and also very long and gratifing. I must say that what you wrote about love is true and can hit you at any time or place. This story is just one example. It doesn't matter if it is fiction or not. True the sex scenes somewhat reinfoced the main idea, but I feel some could have been avoided and weren't needed. But that is just me. You story also is good because it goes out there and touched the terrible topic of rape. All in all I give this a nine for ten. It was great and I loved the plot, but like I said some of the sexual scenes wern't particualarly needed. But hey if you like to write that stuff then far be it from me to hinder your abilities keep on truckin man.
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fanfic!!
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I semi-agree with Cattykit comments, although if a guy is 18 years old and the girl is 17 years old, as long as the parents are fine with it, the guy can't get in trouble. Beside that I thought it was perfect!
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Title: Teacher's Pet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: InuHime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! I love your writing style and how describing you were. I don't agree that people can't fall asleep in such a little amount of time, this is also a fic so either way it wouldn't really matter. I loved it. I hope you keep writing!
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Reviewed By: DemonicTenshi84 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I though that you fic was really good. apart for the flaws that Cattykit pointed out. But other then that it great ^_^ keep up you write.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 20:20 CST
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A rather interesting story. I liked your writting and the plot was good. Thanks for the wonderful read. Later.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Cattykit, this fic is good if you count those two flaws out, it is one of my favourite ones and i've been wondering where it went all of a sudden... i've added it to favourites, kudos to you, good work.
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was pretty good. It kept my attention though it did have its flaws. Firstly, I have to ask, how did Kagome fall in love with Inuyasha so fast? In the beginning, she was complaining how he was unfair and how she was so sure he hated her. Then suddenly, she's in love with him? The transition wasn't very smooth. Also, in the end you said statutory rape was only if one of the two was 13 and unwilling. This is incorrect. Statutory rape includes sexual intercourse with a minor. Kagome is a minor because she is not 18. It doesn't even have to be unconsensual. A guy might turn 18 and have sex with his 17 year-old-girlfriend and still be committing statutory rape. Other than those two areas I think this is pretty good. You could do with some help, but I enjoyed reading this. It was cute and I absolutely love Inu/Kag fics, one-shots especially, so kudos to you. I hope you write more and don't be insulted by my constructive critisizm. I always like to give constructive critisizm so don't feel like I'm just picking on you =) Good luck on writing and keep those Inu/Kag fics coming!
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