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| "Mistakes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Umbra_Omi_Barnner On: May 03, 2003 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pairings may be familiar but you did something entirely original with them. I really loved that. Everyones emotions were so real and alive, not ooc real, or writing what of course they would say, it was honest to hell good. Keep writing (maybe even another chapter) I will be waiting to read what comes out.
Side note doesn't really need the Nc-17 warn | Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm... i like it, but i dont personally think that its a NC-17.. R mabey... i like it though, especially the last chapter. i love the way its written even if ken-chan is a bit OOC. write more!!! |
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