| "Temptation's Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: demonata On: August 01, 2006 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great read and good story line but dont hurt them pweeeeeeessssseeee
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Reviewed By: Ravyn Still On: March 03, 2006 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was beautifully written. It has been years since I've come across a story that spoke so well to me and actually dragged me in like this. I cried, and at the end I couldn't help feeling peaceful and happy. You, cherie, are an amazing writer. Keep it up. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*struggles to actually form words* That was one of the most touching and best written, if not THE most touching fics i have ever read. I actually cried....Your so amazing.*sniffles and wipes mascara running down face*
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Reviewed By: law916 On: August 23, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a gifted writer. I read this story twice now and I still can't get enought. I one of my favorites!
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Reviewed By: Miss FAKE one On: July 21, 2005 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I cried and cried and cried, That was so beautiful.(waaaaaaaaahhhhhaha!!!!) oh, now my eyeliner is running.(sniff) Great job, continue writing such beautiful pieces. Peace and harmony.
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Reviewed By: Charlene On: April 30, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are absolutly amazing...and I'm completly speachless. But, I want to congratulate you on your ultimatley uncanny ability to make your reader feel so many emotions for your portrayl of the characters, that by the end, all the reader has left in their attention span is awe and wonderment at the conclusion of this incredibly erotic story, subtly laced with sure deep feeling that its true sensuality is beyond description.
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Reviewed By: khryssie On: March 18, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very brava!! loved it, and ryo fallen for dee, all to sweet!! keep em comin!
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was INTENSE. I can't believe I just read that in a Public Library. Well, This is written very well, with alot of detail. I wish that i had your writing talents. Overall, I like it. Keep writing.
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Title: Ch.2
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 13:57 CST
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I'm speachless...seriously. I...wow. That was so beautiful, emotional, detailed...I'm stunned. That had to be one of the best lemons I have read in a long time. Absolutley breathtaking. This is by far officially one of my favorite FAKE stories out there. U truely r talented. I am looking foward to future chapters from u and more of ur future works. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: March 06, 2005 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, please update.
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Reviewed By: demisquirtle On: February 12, 2005 17:17 CST
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I really liked your portral of Dee and Ryo. I hope you write the conclusion to this touching tale. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This is just an awesome fic. I really really really would love it if you would please continue with this story. I love Demons and Angels. They are so beautiful, and this love story is one that trancsends all walks of life. I love it. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just wow...That was so beautiful. I loved it! Please, U have got to continue this fic! I'll look back everyday to see if you have updated! Awesome fic! Can tell that it's going to be a masterpiece!! :D Update soon!
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