| "The Life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 29, 2001 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
is it normal that the chapters are so short? your story is very compressed as in regard to the amount of action that happens in only one paragraph. original idea, except the rape part (it made too "cliché" methinks) |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: October 29, 2001 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
short chapters, but it's really good so far, can't wait to see where you're going with this ;D |
Reviewed By: hey hey On: October 29, 2001 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
WEAK!!!!!!!!!! and hows ripping off gladiator this story realy realy SUX |
