| "Why We Hurt the Ones We Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: January 31, 2005 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyes your story. The point of views were different but that is what made it so interesting.You explained Yohji's problem very clearly and it even gave it a little more of a twist. Hope to see you write a sequel to this one??? Because Aya's pov would eally be interesing to see you capture.
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Reviewed By: UsagiYojimbo On: January 30, 2005 22:35 CST
Comment/Review:
We really do need a sequel. Please? Great writing, but you can't just leave Yohji and Aya like that!!
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Reviewed By: Alexiel013 On: January 30, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good writing. I know this is your first fic and I can't believe it. We need a sequel. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very powerful, very sad. I almost expected Schuldig to show up, although you've laid out the psychological reasons quite clearly. Great as a one shot, but perhaps a sequel -- there is still Aya's point of view, and the issue of what comes next (Ken and Yohji off to Europe or . . . )?
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You already know what I think, but I figured I would say it again. You're a great writer! Don't stop :)
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: January 30, 2005 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is... WOW. This story really touched me.
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