| "Crimson Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: response
Reviewed By: me On: February 08, 2005 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
yesh, well, I re-wrote it (already!) and added more to make the ending better (it bothered me so much) and i have yet to post it. i was thinking tenseiga, but that would defeat the purpose of it being a depressing tradgity. he does use it, but not on kagome. i guess i could write an alternate ending for people who want a happy ending, it shouldn't take long at all. thanks for reviewing! to both of you! always~ jen aka kagura-hime
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 07, 2005 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
It such a beautiful story!!!!!!!!!!! I havent ever read one so heart-rending as this... BUT, there is one thing you forgot to take into account. One thing, One word... Tenseiga...
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Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg...you are truly a talented writer. That made me cry!!!!! And I don't cry easily! lol I loved it. And the way you worded it was perfect.
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