Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 16:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok I'm officially confused. The first two chapters had a great and easy flow to them. Sess' wife bites it in childbirth, got that. Then he raises his daughter, fine so far. First day of school, meets Rin. It's still all good. But I got to chapter 3, and WTF? It doesn't seem to go with what you started with. I think you need to clarify this a little bit, please. Don't get me wrong I did like it, I just hated to third chapter.~ B reading U!
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