"To Catch A Dragonball" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: ~.^ Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 17:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fic, can't wait for you to update. Please don't make us wait for 2 more years! lol jk ~holds up empty hands~ See I diddn't even bring a nerf bat! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2002 02:40 CST Comment/Review: oh ho ho ho keep writing, i soo love it when ppl update, im shocking at updating but keep wrting i need to read more |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 22:59 CST Comment/Review: now i dont know if ive already written you a review but oh well, its good to get more... well i love this, you seriously have to update soon
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 18:55 CST Comment/Review: Ew, where is that B/V? (searches frantically for it) I know it's here somewhere. BTW, are the bad guys really that stupid. Although that is so funny, Vegeta fighting over Bulma and she escapes! roflmbo!
Waiting for more! You do have at least one loyal fan here! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: January 14, 2002 19:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I don't know if I commented on this story yet since I had to catch up (no pun on your story intended), but it is good.
Where is Vegeta's flip side? I know, you must start at a B/Y at first, but please get to the B/V fast! lol I love Vegeta. Can't wait for more of him and his dual personality (dual? more like centi lol)
9, that's my rating for the cliffy. Vegeta cliffies are best. This one.... I know who's there. Bad guy....or Yamcha betraying her=bad guy. duh! 99.9999999999% sure at least.
MORE VEGETA!!!! I know, you'll do this, since it has to turn B/V. |
Reviewed By: Sally On: January 03, 2002 00:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the way you changed this around. I really loved the cliffhangers too. I also liked the fact that you put me in suspense *not really* with the guy with the dark hair because for all I know he is Vegeta *yeah right him taking orders* or Yamcha *the guy is a wimp*. Anyway I really love this story so far! Please get the next chapter out soon! |