| "Innocent Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
u guys can read the whole story in fanfiction.net the site is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2130945/1/
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Title: meh.
Reviewed By: takari_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were various mistakes and it seamed a bit rushed. Also you may want to consider spaces between paragraphs so it doesn't resemble block text. Other than that the story is pretty nice, lightly origional and keeps a tight hold on the readers attention without going off into romance land whenever something happenes between Inuyasha and Kagome.
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Title: hurry and review!!!!
Reviewed By: :D On: June 29, 2005 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the whole story but ya need to work on ur spelling and grammar a little bit! hurry an review im really enjoying this fic!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: inuyasha-sesshomaru-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're doing great with the story but u need to work on your spelling a little bit!! i do like it tho. hurry and update plz!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: Nottellen On: April 02, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GReat origonality i really enjoyed it, Update soon!!!!! I'm dieing to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: JRJB On: April 02, 2005 04:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an amazing story, normally I don't care for the whole vampire thing but you made it good. And just to help- Use spell check or have someone check your work before you post it. Other-wise GREAT WORK! Please keep going.
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Title: Thank you!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thank you for updating and please update soon!! Oh and thank you so much for being a Inu/Kag person so am I!!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: nottellen On: March 31, 2005 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just liked it and please continue with the story
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Title: none
Reviewed By: nottellen On: March 31, 2005 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just liked it and please continue with the story
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Title: please
Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh this story is awesome!!! Update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bk On: March 14, 2005 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story but you need to check your spelling. This is a really good story so keep up the good work and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ApAtHy aNgEl On: March 09, 2005 20:58 CST
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I like this......demon vampires.....awesome.......yeah......ZHeek huh?.....isn't that creative..........heh heh.. uPdAtE
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: February 21, 2005 14:45 CST
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Yay! You updated! *does a dance* I like how inuyasha messes with people! it makes him seem so cool! What's gonna happen with kagome?!?!?!?! OMG I cant wait till the next one!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:58 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I SO LOVE IT!! You gotta update soon!
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Title: I LUV IT
Reviewed By: sunshynsurfer On: February 21, 2005 08:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!! I love how u added the vampire mix into it. great info on the vampys too! I LUV IT, LUV IT, LUV IT!
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Reviewed By: HotaruFireFly On: February 20, 2005 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Before updating use spell check, that is about the only thing your story needs. I enjoyed it, and it was very original, but I have a pet peeve about bad grammar, so that did bug me. This isn't a flame, I don't agree with flaming. This merely friendly advice. CIAO
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Title: *UpDaTe*
Reviewed By: FeelingBlu22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Please Update I love ur story so much!!! Both me and my friend can't wait till u have updated it more! It's really good!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
lol I love it! I dont ever see many Inu/vampire fics. Are there gonna be any lemons in the fic? Or is it gonna stay PG13?
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Reviewed By: Inu Youkai 484 On: February 09, 2005 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
really a very nice story.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Koi (NOT LOGIN) On: February 08, 2005 06:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!Update!Update! Then I might just review,review,review! Even trade, right?
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Title: (^.^)
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
your story is good and i can't wait for you to update it. is rin in going to be in this story? anyway can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Feeling Blue On: February 02, 2005 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like ur style of writing b/c it consumes ur thoughts 4 momment and u want 2 read more. I saw some spelling errors like tomorrow was spelled tomarrow, but it didnt ruin the story. It is extremely original b/c of the fact that Inuyasha is a vampire and i like vampire stories there's just something about them. I really enjoyed it til the very end of ch. 3 so plz write more. Overall it was one of the best FanFics i have read out of about 34.
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Title: *squeels*
Reviewed By: takari_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 17:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I was right!!!!!! You are one of the best!!!!!!!! I just love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........Now that I have enough exclimation pionts in here I'll be leaving... -Clarisa T. Spence
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 16:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far, I hope you get a chance to update soon.
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Title: awesome fic
Reviewed By: Xx Nature_Lover xX On: January 31, 2005 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE please , * cries and screams at sudden dramatic rainfall* no really its an awesome fic update soon ok :) Never let your spirit die
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Silly_Princess On: January 31, 2005 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey please update soon i think its really cool and i really think you should continue ~* chow *~
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Title: kool story man
Reviewed By: kool person that you wish you knew On: January 31, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey man is kool so far keep it up , dont let me down and if you do ...
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: January 31, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey update , its good , i normally dont read stories that are not completed along with my friends to , we normally wait till its done then review , but i felt you needed atleast one review, remember update , its really good so far :) foxfire_14 mediaminer member
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