| "Unwanted" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: "Unwanted"
Reviewed By: choconut76 On: May 08, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! that is sooooo cool!--- u need 2 post the next chapter asap!pleeeeeeeease?????--- i'll give u a bunny..... (\/) (..) () well i thought it looked like a bunny.....
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: February 07, 2005 01:51 CST
Comment/Review:
What in the world?!?!?!?!?!?! Hurry up and write the next chapter! Too much mystery overloads my system!*weeell, not technically* I have to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Pup On: January 31, 2005 20:00 CST
Comment/Review:
oh no wat happens why is evryone gonna hate kagome?! plz update soon i wanna foind ut wat happens next also whos she gonna be paired up with?
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 02:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooohhh... is that Naraku talking in ???POV??? Is he taking the form of Inu again and making Kag think that it's him? OOH OOH!! Please update soon so I can find out!! Good story!
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