| "My Mommy Kurama?" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: ICE maiden goddess YUkina On: February 06, 2005 15:57 CST
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Go Mitsuki and Tatsuki your the best, so tell me the whole new chapies next.
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Reviewed By: you are alwsome On: February 06, 2005 15:47 CST
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I just read your story again, and notice that you wrote Kurama remember the night before. So it good to have a flash back. Thank for letting us know. Alot of my friend lovce your fan fic please updated soon. HHHHAaaaaaaaaaahhhhhaaaaaaaa Karasu is out number haaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaa
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Reviewed By: sorrow and pain On: February 06, 2005 15:43 CST
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Just to remind you that I'm not allow to see sexor read sex, because my mom wouldn't allowed so please give me a waring sign so I'll know and skip it, thank.
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Reviewed By: AL On: February 06, 2005 15:39 CST
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Oh I think is wrong to add sex in there. But it your story so please give me a warning so I will KNow and skip it. And please tell me when is safe to read it ok thank
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Reviewed By: SOS On: February 06, 2005 15:33 CST
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Yeah, one more request. When will Kurama and Hiei find out that their doughter is missing. PLease updated soon. So I can't find out what happen next.
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Reviewed By: Mommy Kurama On: February 06, 2005 15:31 CST
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Heey let Kurama and Hiei have sex that would be sooo cool. But I can't wait to see what is like to have KURama as a woman having sex with Hiei. Please Updated this for me too? Please?
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Reviewed By: Lovely Goddess Youko On: February 06, 2005 15:23 CST
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I love it, I simply love it. I just want to say good luck on your next chapteries please.
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Reviewed By: ICE maiden goddess YUkina On: February 06, 2005 15:20 CST
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Wholly wow. I think this story is great. Alot of my friend read this story, and told this story of your is great. Tah the Edgar Poe poem is a very good idea to put in there thank. Updated soon for the next chapies.
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Reviewed By: sore my mind On: February 06, 2005 15:16 CST
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I defenitly like your story. *clapping and cheering* I had read your other review and I had to say LET"S KURAMA AND HIEI HAVE SEX yay! I think it would be nice wouldn't you think? Well Update soon k?
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Reviewed By: lugia phoenix sapphire On: February 06, 2005 15:14 CST
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Wow I like, you got the story very nice Tatsuki and MiTsuki. I love you story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: you are alwsome On: February 05, 2005 23:09 CST
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Love your story. I fan of Kurama and Hiei, so make them having sex.
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Reviewed By: Mommy Kurama On: February 05, 2005 23:00 CST
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*laught* Oh I just adore your story. Chapter 5 is lovely. Sweet Kiyoshi. In your story can you describe Kiyoshi look like please I really need to know. Update the next chapter soon/
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Reviewed By: AL On: February 05, 2005 22:50 CST
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*clapping* Nice story. Update soon? I like that chapter5 it lovely mother and son bonding. Hiei must be proud to have a son and daughter.
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Reviewed By: Nani Oh On: February 05, 2005 22:48 CST
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WOW. I'M SO TIRE BUT YOUR SWEET STORY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION. I'M SO TIRE BUT THAT STORY ON CHAPTER 5 IS AMZING GIRL! SCARIES TOO. ESPECIALLY THAT RAVEN POEM. I THINK I KNOW THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM EDGAR SOMETHING. WELL UPDATE SOON. NIGHT `.` lOVE IT
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Reviewed By: sorrow and pain On: February 05, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story. Please don't write sex in there. Please? I think you should jsut add kissing and hugging that all. But if you do write sex, PLEASE GIVE ME A WARNING SIGN? I like Kiyoshi he seem sweet.
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