| "My Mommy Kurama?" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kusiekuro mine On: February 03, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, Please Up Date Soon Please? ~"."~ please update soon? prety please
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Reviewed By: kokoki it me On: February 03, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey I love the story, thought I'm not to much in YYH and all but just update the next chap. Oh ok I love that little girl. Oh you should add a little brother in so the story could be more exciting. Please?
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 03, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo yo yo I love love your story babe. I love that little girl. What was that little girl name? Oh it Niichi right? I love that little sweety.
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 03, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool and lovely. So this girl is Niichi and she from the future? And she child of Kurama and HIei? It alwsome update soon? PPPPPPPPPPppllllllllllleaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeee? please type the next chap soon!
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Reviewed By: ROXUY On: February 03, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story I love your idea. Your quiet creative in your story Please update the next chap, pretty please? ^.^
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Reviewed By: SOS On: February 03, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what an alwsome story. I like it very much please update soon. I think Hiei should be short, your idea is great. I always want Kurama to be a dear mother, OHH! Shiori is going to has grandchildren, and Wah. What will happen if she find out about Hiei? abo
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