| "My Mommy Kurama?" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: lugia phoenix sapphire On: February 06, 2005 15:14 CST
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Wow I like, you got the story very nice Tatsuki and MiTsuki. I love you story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: you are alwsome On: February 05, 2005 23:09 CST
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Love your story. I fan of Kurama and Hiei, so make them having sex.
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Reviewed By: Mommy Kurama On: February 05, 2005 23:00 CST
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*laught* Oh I just adore your story. Chapter 5 is lovely. Sweet Kiyoshi. In your story can you describe Kiyoshi look like please I really need to know. Update the next chapter soon/
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Reviewed By: AL On: February 05, 2005 22:50 CST
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*clapping* Nice story. Update soon? I like that chapter5 it lovely mother and son bonding. Hiei must be proud to have a son and daughter.
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Reviewed By: Nani Oh On: February 05, 2005 22:48 CST
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WOW. I'M SO TIRE BUT YOUR SWEET STORY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION. I'M SO TIRE BUT THAT STORY ON CHAPTER 5 IS AMZING GIRL! SCARIES TOO. ESPECIALLY THAT RAVEN POEM. I THINK I KNOW THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM EDGAR SOMETHING. WELL UPDATE SOON. NIGHT `.` lOVE IT
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Reviewed By: sorrow and pain On: February 05, 2005 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story. Please don't write sex in there. Please? I think you should jsut add kissing and hugging that all. But if you do write sex, PLEASE GIVE ME A WARNING SIGN? I like Kiyoshi he seem sweet.
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Reviewed By: bee bee bu On: February 05, 2005 22:40 CST
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I'm just stopby to read your story. I can believe you write thet much. You must be like well love writing. But doesn't it hurt you finger, hand, or wrist? Well alot of reader suggest you should writ Hiei and Kurama having sex, but wat about the little son of Kurama. I think you should writ Hiei and Kurama having sex, I would like to read that.
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 05, 2005 22:36 CST
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Woooooowwwwwwwww! Chaptr 5 is huge and long. YOur good. It must be long huh? I think you should add Hiei having sex with Kurama, anywhere that Kiyoshi kid can't see. Love your story, update soon TAtsuki and MItSUki.
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Reviewed By: ki ko ki ri no YO! On: February 05, 2005 22:32 CST
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Wolly Wow. Big chap you have. Love your story all the way. It so sweet that me and my mother read your fanfic. Me and she like your story, it such a heart warming. She said your very talented. Updated the next chapter, so me and my mom could read it.
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Reviewed By: kokoki it me On: February 05, 2005 22:29 CST
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Wow alot seem to like your story. I amazed by your hard work. Please update nex chap.
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Reviewed By: ROXUY On: February 05, 2005 22:27 CST
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Wow wow wow! I say this story of your is the best I have ever read. Perhap you should add Hiei in the next chap having sex with Kurama. After all aren't their husband and wife? Anyways, I wish you the best of luck.
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Reviewed By: Kusiekuro mine On: February 05, 2005 22:24 CST
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Ohhhhhhhhh. I love it, I love it. especialy the chapter 5. How sweet I alway want Kurama to be a mother. Please update what happen next in the story. I'm a big fan of Hiei Jaganshi, please. Please update. And include Hiei.
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Reviewed By: SOS On: February 05, 2005 22:21 CST
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Love it, what a cute story. Why is kurama a she again? I thought she was a he in Yu Yu Hakusho. Well please tell me wat happen next. Gotta update...Update...Gotta update the next chapter. $.$ So please up date?
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 05, 2005 22:17 CST
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Lovely poem such a lovely poem from Edgar Poe. He that poor man right and that dying lover of his. Up date the next chaptor. I really like to know what happen next. ^.*
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Reviewed By: shishishokio On: February 05, 2005 22:15 CST
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WOW, chap 5 is so long. Thank you so much for up dating the new chap. I love chapter 5 is so nice. The Raven and Anabel Lee it really great poem. Update the next chapy soon please.
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