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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Magicaldreams On: March 24, 2005 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its pretty good. I agree with WingedYoukai that sometimes your sentences get a little long though. That's all. I can't believe that not so many people are reviewing cause I liked it a lot. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: I-luv-Sesshoumaru On: March 24, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic, I really liked reading. Update soon! Best wishes to your writing, I-luv-Sesshoumaru
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Reviewed By: WingedYoukai On: March 24, 2005 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On a whole, that was one of the best KagSess fanfiction that I have read from a first time writer. To anyone, other than the Fantasies, who might be reading this, I strongly recommend this story to all KagSess fans. However, I was going to point out that your sentences are very long, almost to the point of a run-on. Also, while I like the description (it helps make the story come to life), too much of it gets a bit confusing. On the bright side though, the plot is very original and is much more captivating than some others that I have read. The characters that you made up have complete , realistic personalities, unlike in some other stories where the made-up characters are almost bipolar. I especially find the Dark Miko very well-written, unless she's not supposed to be a big-headed. General Nikuso is also very well done. Please continue to write this fanfiction; you have 100% of my support. This story is really one of a kind. Please post Chapter 4 soon, I can't wait to see how the story progresses. Unfortunately, I need to end my review now (I've nearly run out of my 1,500 characters). Update soon! You are a great writer, regardless of what other reviewers have written. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inu-demon On: March 24, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought it was okay. No, it was pretty good. Wait, it was actually really good. And the final result of all the above is that the story was GREAT!!!! I hope that you continue writing this story and that afterwards you'll write other fan fictions. You can be sure that I would read them! :) Please post Chapter 4 as soon as you think there are enough readers. I promise that I'll review if you do...please?
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 13:45 CST
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You just have to leave us dangling? So I can't wait for the next chapter! That should be a real book that Koenma was reading from. Anyways just update soon, great chapter!
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Title: Fascinating
Reviewed By: SilverWingedYoukai On: March 22, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!! You finally updated! I've been waiting forever for this chapter! I have to say, it was worth the wait and I really liked it! Update as soon as you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: hieisgurl1489 On: February 28, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u think you should name Kiorin i think its pretty good but i had no one to use it on in my fan fiction if you would like to read my storie its on fanfiction.net under the title of dangers of the unknown, ragons and tigers in the inuyasha catagorie i would love it if you review please. and keep up the good work P.S. im not partian to flaming people but i do accept them.
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Reviewed By: Joychan On: February 18, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I like it, keep updating please :) I got two suggestions for a name: Shouri I think it means "Victory" or...Yasashi which means "feminine" or Teinei which means "courteous"...just throwing those out there.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: DoGgYLoVe On: February 18, 2005 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVED ReAdInG iT!!! CrAzY fOr MoRe ChApTeRs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UpDaTe SoOn!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chrissy14 On: February 15, 2005 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is interesting, I can't wait to hear more! Oh, no! Where is RIN?!! Update soon please!! =)
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: DoDobird On: February 10, 2005 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I practically LOVED it! Update soon...really soon!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Enchanter On: February 10, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. Update soon!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Enchanter On: February 10, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. I enjoyed reading it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Hmmmm....
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Veddy, veddy interesting. Ok, I'll bite.. would LOVE to see more. It's well written, original, and intriguing. Other than that, I'll hold off forming an opinion till I see more. ^_^ But.. so far, it's good! ~Caliko
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