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Reviewed By: Don't_Like_to_Review On: April 23, 2005 18:44 CDT
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That was pretty good. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_rocks On: April 23, 2005 14:57 CDT
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Short but good chappie; update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tomoe34 On: April 22, 2005 22:16 CDT
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That was pretty good, but kinda short. I hope the next chapter's way longer. Update!
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Reviewed By: WingedYoukai On: April 22, 2005 22:15 CDT
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Me again! The fourth chapter was slightly different than what I expected. I can't wait for the next chapter though. Before I forget, I was wondering why you had to skip the dropping Sesshoumaru part. It's not that I wanted to see it, but I thought that since it's important, you'd go through it all. Anyways, update as soon as possible. I saw your new story, The Unbidden. I hope it's KagSess, but InuKag is okay sometimes too. Well, onto The Unbidden! Update this soon!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Suns (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You MUST update!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter.... will kagome find Sesshy? will he survive on his own??? I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!! oh, and theis story is written really well. I hate it when people write with really bad gramar. one of my pet peeves. if you can't use grammar properly, you shouldn't be writing. anyhoo, please update!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Grace9 On: April 02, 2005 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really neat chapter! When will you update (not to be demanding or anything)? It's really nicely written! For once, there aren't ANY spelling or grammar errors! Please update soon! T_T
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Reviewed By: Don't_Like_to_Review On: March 31, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the name says, I don't like to review, except when it's a really good fic, like in your case. It was fun to read, kind of funny, but was realistic at the same time too. That takes practice and talent that not every one has. Please continue writing. I look forward to seeing how the story continues. It has a very good plot that you just see every day.
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Reviewed By: BueFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 19:52 CST
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luv it!!!update soon!!^-^
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Reviewed By: BueFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 19:51 CST
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WOW...What a GREAT!!!! ficy...me really liky!!
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Reviewed By: BueFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 19:49 CST
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Interesting...Me liky...actually this is the first time I read the story.
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: BoXXeDin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was cool
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: Tomoe34 On: March 25, 2005 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. If you don't mind me asking, but wasn't there a third chatper just a few days ago? I'm sure I read it just a few days ago, with the Dark Miko and the Eastern Lord fighting? Well, anyways, it was a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_rocks On: March 24, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice chappie...luved reading it. Well, nothing more to say, so update soon or else I'll hunt you down (kidding, basically it means that I hope you post Chapter 4 as soon as possible)! :)
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_rocks On: March 24, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice chappie...luved reading it. Well, nothing more to say, so update soon or else I'll hunt you down (kidding, basically it means that I hope you post Chapter 4 as soon as possible)! :)
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Reviewed By: 20/10 On: March 24, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked it update soon,gtg, good fanfic
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