| "The truth about hurtful words" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Minis On: July 07, 2005 16:21 CDT
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Yeah you finally updated!!! You know I sometimes forget what this story is about, and have to go read it all over again...
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Title: The truth about hurtful words
Reviewed By: Lizzie18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I'm especially waiting for the lemon, which was promised. It's so hard finding good lemons nowdays and with fanfiction.net's new rules it's even harder. You have captured the characters real nicely but I would prefer a little more emotion. The originality of the story is good, but a bit typical of Ramna/Akane pairing stories. I hope you update soon! Love // Lizzie
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Reviewed By: Kagomiko_nsi On: June 18, 2005 19:35 CDT
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How could you do that to me?! That was so bad . . . but now I can't wait for the next chapter ^-^, Plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 16, 2005 17:24 CDT
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And so the Satome ultimate attack, foot in mouth is executed flawlessly once again. Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 01, 2005 17:13 CDT
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Oh my...this could be interesting. How will he react to her stairing at him? Will he stick his foot in his mouth once again? Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:57 CST
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good fic, in chap 2 you said chap 3 was the last, well I assume not. so I can't wait for the next chappie, Ranma should tie Akane up and force her to hear his apology, because it sounds like she wont listen otherwise. ~Na
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 21:52 CST
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Sorry i6t took so long, but this is great!!!!
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Reviewed By: Harukue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the thing that keeps me up at night! Very well done,but somehow the characters seem OOC to me. Guess I been reading too much ranma romance fanfics.I been waiting for a "good" ranma n akane kissing sceen. PLZ finish! Or I'll send my naked rat and her 6 babies to rip off your head!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 13, 2005 17:52 CST
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Excellent chapter. I wonder what Ranma will do now... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: k'yra On: February 13, 2005 11:38 CST
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this is a great story, but you might want to watch your punctuation and chapter length a little. i can't wait to find see how ryouga and ranma settle things, as well as ranma and akane.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 07, 2005 17:06 CST
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Excellent chapter! Don't worry about the lemon...I think I've already read more than the safe limit for any normal person...although I do look forwards to seeing what you do with it. I wonder what Ranma can possibly say or do to Akane to make her want to do that with him...as they say hell hath no fury like a woman scorned... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 15:14 CST
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UPDATE!!! :-P
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 08:05 CST
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I like it!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 31, 2005 15:51 CST
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To be honest I loved it, you know you could probably make this into a longer piece though I won't complain about a lemon. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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