| "The truth about hurtful words" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaptin hippy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 15:11 CDT
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Pretty good. Do you plan on finishing it?
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 01:08 CDT
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I just discovered your story. I liked it, but you never finished it. Where's the lemon you kept saying was coming. I was very disappointed you didn't end the story. One more chapter would have done it. You write very well and everyone stayed in character. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Well... a late update is better than no update at all^_^
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Reviewed By: Haruke On: September 03, 2006 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, its Harukue, but Im so lazy to login...-__- Interesting, but the chiff-hangers make me go ballistic!!!..lol maybe I really want them two together too much...I'm so obbsessed...^__^; Happy you finally updated! Keep it up!\(^_^)/
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Reviewed By: LunaticChick88 On: April 14, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story, but the chapters are frustratingly short. you really might want to reconsider where exactly u end the chapter, because it has a large effect on the flow of the story. if you leave off in the middle of a particularly dramatic scene, then it tends to make the story kind of choppy. btw, i dont intend this as a flame, or anything, i just kinda noticed that some of the chapters really could have been combined into one
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Reviewed By: BluNic On: March 16, 2006 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is HORRIBLE! H-O-R-R-I-B-L-E!! Dumbest i ever read..
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Reviewed By: please continue On: March 07, 2006 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey why'd ya stop this is really good please UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:44 CST
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weee!! get to the good part soon will ya?! I luv ur story I really hope u update it soon
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Reviewed By: quack On: February 27, 2006 06:14 CST
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Wow, i wonder what's gonna happen next. I like this serious Ranma!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 19:20 CST
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Wow... it's been quite a while... Yayyy!UPDATE ONEGAI!^_^
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Title: The Truth About Hurtful Words
Reviewed By: bitch slaper On: October 17, 2005 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic but please continue I hate being kept in suspense!!!^__^
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Reviewed By: Miyu_Starfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! More! More!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 20:31 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: ukyou-chan On: August 03, 2005 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update faster. its nice but a little too short. lemon pls!!! Ja.
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Reviewed By: mel sanzo On: July 21, 2005 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic. my fav bit so far is the end. please update soon and i would appreciate if you sent me a mail. im melaniesanzo nice stry
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